List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question with clear supporting details. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the essential items I need. Moreover, it keeps me organized and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but is a bit repetitive and lengthy. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid repeating the same ideas. Also, use simpler sentence structures for clarity.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize important tasks. As a result, I stay organized and do not forget any important duties.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes that affect understanding. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid confusing phrases. Use linking words to connect your reasons logically and keep your answer concise.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously. Additionally, they may feel that making lists takes too much time or is unnecessary.

제안: Your answer has good points but contains some unclear phrases and minor grammatical errors. Try to use clear and precise language, and organise your ideas logically with linking words. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and easy to edit. In contrast, paper lists can be lost, which makes it harder to keep track of tasks.

× Yes, I make a list when I go to shopping because it gives me a basic idea of what other things that are necessary for me before I go to the supermarket or any other places.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it gives me a basic idea of what other things are necessary for me before I go to the supermarket or any other places.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is followed by the gerund form without 'to' when referring to activities. The correct form is 'go shopping'. Also, 'that are necessary' should be 'are necessary' without 'that' for smoother sentence flow.

× It makes me feel that I am a disciplined person with a basic structure in my mind and this near these type of laser really helpful even when you.

✓ It makes me feel that I am a disciplined person with a basic structure in my mind and these types of lists are really helpful even when you.

The phrase 'this near these type of laser' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'these types of lists' to correctly refer to multiple lists. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly for clarity.

× Yes, I always make a list when I work as it allows me to be organized and helped me to differentiate between the works that are necessary and are of extreme importance or are of priority than the ones which are not as important as the other ones.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I work as it allows me to be organized and helps me to differentiate between the tasks that are necessary and of extreme importance or are a priority compared to the ones which are not as important.

The verb 'helped' is incorrectly used in past tense; it should be 'helps' to agree with the present tense context. Also, 'works' should be 'tasks' or 'work' as 'works' is not commonly used in this context. The phrase 'are of priority than' should be 'are a priority compared to' for correct comparison.

× Some people do not like make English because they do their work spontaneous, real or in the heat of the moment they complete the task or the work that isn't, that has to be done or simply on my personal opinion, I believe that some people think that it is too much time consuming or it's lazy for them or they're being lazy to make a list.

✓ Some people do not like to make lists because they do their work spontaneously, really or in the heat of the moment they complete the task or the work that has to be done. Simply, in my personal opinion, I believe that some people think that it is too time-consuming or they are lazy to make a list.

The phrase 'like make English' is incorrect; it should be 'like to make lists'. 'Spontaneous' should be 'spontaneously' as an adverb describing how they do their work. The sentence structure is confusing and needs to be split for clarity. 'Too much time consuming' should be 'too time-consuming'. 'It's lazy for them' is incorrect; it should be 'they are lazy'.

× I prefer to make my list on the phone as it is more accessible and gives me easier ways to edit it and also frequently.

✓ I prefer to make my list on the phone as it is more accessible and gives me easier ways to edit it frequently.

The word 'frequently' is misplaced and creates an incomplete sentence. It should be placed after 'edit it' to correctly modify the verb phrase. The phrase 'and also frequently' is incomplete and needs to be integrated properly.

× Also the corn in making lists in the paper is that if the paper goes missing you can easily forget whatever you have written and this allows me to keep the track of my tasks and also it can be edited very easily.

✓ Also, the problem with making lists on paper is that if the paper goes missing, you can easily forget whatever you have written. This does not allow me to keep track of my tasks, and it cannot be edited easily.

The word 'corn' is a typo and should be 'problem'. 'In making lists in the paper' should be 'with making lists on paper'. The sentence is run-on and needs to be split for clarity. 'This allows me to keep the track' is incorrect; it should be 'this does not allow me to keep track'. Also, paper lists cannot be edited easily, so the sentence is corrected accordingly.