List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to form complete sentences and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence. Avoid repetition and irrelevant details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily, especially since I have ADHD. Making a list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss anything important.

제안: Your response is somewhat unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work, especially study plans. Without a list, I get distracted by social media, so having a plan helps me stay focused and accomplish my tasks efficiently.

제안: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to provide a clear opinion with reasons and examples. Use complete sentences and avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or unnecessary. They may prefer to remember tasks mentally or feel that lists limit their flexibility.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to incomplete sentences and unclear ideas. Provide a clear preference with reasons and examples, using linking words to connect your points logically.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. Using my phone helps me set reminders and easily update my tasks throughout the day.

× Definitely be cause.

✓ Definitely, because.

The original sentence lacks proper sentence structure and punctuation. Adding a comma after 'Definitely' and correcting 'be cause' to 'because' forms a coherent response.

× When go to shop I.

✓ When I go shopping.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before the verb 'go' and the verb form should be 'go shopping' to indicate the activity. Correct word order is necessary for clarity.

× Because I have ADHD 'cause I have ADHD and yeah, when I'm interacting with people it become.

✓ Because I have ADHD, and yeah, when I'm interacting with people, it becomes difficult to remember things.

The sentence is fragmented and repetitive. Adding commas and completing the thought with 'it becomes difficult to remember things' clarifies the meaning.

× Forgot 10 Yeah so I need to. Forecast.

✓ I forget things easily, so I need to plan ahead.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Rewriting it to express the idea of forgetting things and needing to plan improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I do make a list for my work like especially studies plan.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work, especially a study plan.

The phrase 'like especially studies plan' is awkward. Replacing it with 'especially a study plan' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× If I don't have that, I will be like scrolling social media or the wishful effect might listen to totally in my ranking.

✓ If I don't have that, I end up scrolling social media or getting distracted, which affects my focus.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. Rewriting it to express distraction due to lack of a plan improves clarity and grammar.

× So yeah, I may have. This and I took it my way accomplish.

✓ So yeah, I may have this, and I take it my way to accomplish tasks.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting the structure and verb forms makes the meaning understandable.

× Is it cost to make something that isn't necessary text?

✓ Is it a hassle to make something that isn't necessary?

The phrase 'Is it cost to make something' is incorrect. Replacing 'cost' with 'a hassle' and removing 'text' clarifies the intended meaning.

× For the dating routine and yeah.

✓ For the daily routine, yeah.

'Dating routine' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'daily routine'. Correcting it improves meaning and grammar.

× Written by mobile in this ****.

✓ It's written on my mobile phone.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Rewriting it to a complete sentence clarifies the meaning.

× Error rate.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone.

'Error rate' is unrelated and unclear. Providing a clear answer to the question improves coherence.

× I'm performing at least on my phone because I have I been in this modern day people usually carry their phone everywhere so.

✓ I prefer using my phone because nowadays people usually carry their phones everywhere.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains errors. Rewriting it with proper structure and verb forms improves clarity.

× Yeah, right.

✓ Yes, that's right.

Adding 'Yes, that's' completes the affirmation and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I swept off there as well of the screen.

✓ I swipe off notifications on the screen as well.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Replacing 'swept off' with 'swipe off' and clarifying the object improves meaning.

× My remind remind them to accomplish the attacks daily text and illegal.

✓ My reminders help me accomplish daily tasks and texts.

The original sentence is confusing and contains errors. Rewriting it to express that reminders help accomplish daily tasks is clearer and grammatically correct.