List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear phrases and minor grammar mistakes, such as 'and Shield' and 'repair list'. To improve, focus on clear and correct expressions, avoid redundancy, and keep sentences concise. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and saves time. For example, by listing items beforehand, I avoid buying unnecessary things and can shop more efficiently.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'what bottle my ID card'. To improve, use complete sentences, clarify your points, and connect ideas with linking words for better coherence.

예시: Yes, I make a list for work every night to ensure I don't forget anything important. For instance, I include my ID card, water bottle, and other essential accessories on the list.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains awkward phrasing and grammar mistakes, such as 'make list' and 'fade it in their brain'. To improve, use correct expressions and provide clearer reasons with linking words to enhance coherence.

예시: I'm not sure, but I think some people find making lists unnecessary because they believe it wastes time. Instead, they prefer to remember tasks mentally without writing them down.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has minor grammar errors and unclear phrases like 'nodes' instead of 'Notes'. To improve, use correct vocabulary, avoid redundancy, and connect ideas smoothly with linking words.

예시: I used to write my lists on paper because my phone didn't have a notes app. However, now I use the built-in Notes app on my iPhone to prepare all my lists conveniently.

× I think it's one of those and Shield so that you'll be on track on what to buy and what not to do, and it also saves you a lot of time.

✓ I think it's one of those things and should help so that you'll be on track about what to buy and what not to do, and it also saves you a lot of time.

The phrase 'and Shield' is incorrect and unclear. It seems the student intended to say 'and should help'. Also, 'on track on' should be 'on track about' to correctly express the idea of being aware of what to buy and what not to buy. The correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I think it's always the best idea to make repair list and plan your shopping accordingly.

✓ So I think it's always the best idea to make a proper list and plan your shopping accordingly.

The phrase 'repair list' is incorrect in this context; the student likely meant 'proper list'. Also, the article 'a' is missing before 'proper list'. This correction fixes the adjective usage and article usage to make the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× For instance, if I want to go to work and I'll make a list of everything the night that I need to take with me.

✓ For instance, if I want to go to work, I'll make a list the night before of everything I need to take with me.

The original sentence has a conjunction 'and' that disrupts the sentence structure and the phrase 'the night that' is awkward. The correction removes 'and' and rephrases to 'the night before' to clarify the timing and improve sentence flow.

× For example what bottle my ID card, essentials. Accessories.

✓ For example, my ID card, essentials, and accessories.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'What bottle' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The correction lists the items clearly and connects them properly with commas and 'and' to form a complete and clear sentence.

× I'm not exactly sure because I fall under the category of people who make list for everything, but generally I think some people might believe it.

✓ I'm not exactly sure because I fall under the category of people who make lists for everything, but generally I think some people might believe that.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' to agree with 'people who make'. Also, 'believe it' is vague; 'believe that' is more appropriate to introduce a following idea or belief. This correction fixes pronoun and noun agreement and improves clarity.

× Maybe they'll just fade it in their brain.

✓ Maybe they'll just fade it from their brain.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'from' to indicate something being lost or disappearing from memory. This correction fixes the prepositional error to convey the intended meaning.

× In the past I used to make a list on my paper because I didn't have any application on my phone that supports notes.

✓ In the past, I used to make a list on paper because I didn't have any application on my phone that supported notes.

The phrase 'my paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct expression. Also, 'supports' should be in past tense 'supported' to match the past context. This correction fixes quantifier and tense usage.

× But these days I've been using iPhone so it has an inbuilt application called nodes.

✓ But these days I've been using an iPhone, so it has an inbuilt application called Notes.

The noun 'iPhone' needs the indefinite article 'an' before it. Also, 'nodes' is a misspelling of 'Notes', the correct name of the application. This correction fixes article usage and spelling errors.

× So I prepare my list everything in it.

✓ So I prepare my entire list in it.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'My list everything in it' is not correct English. The correction rephrases to 'my entire list in it' to clearly express that the list is prepared within the application.