List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh việc chia câu không hợp lý và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì tách câu "Because it helps me to stay organized and ensures that I don't forget any. Important items." thành hai câu, bạn nên nối chúng lại để tránh sự gián đoạn và làm câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

예시: Definitely, I make a shopping list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures that I don't forget any important items. Moreover, it saves me time and effort during the shopping trip.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến việc phát âm rõ ràng và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh việc chia câu không hợp lý và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý. Ví dụ, câu "making a work list is the top. Text before I. Attached to my desk." nên được nối lại thành một câu hoàn chỉnh để tránh gây khó hiểu.

예시: Absolutely, I am quite disciplined, so making a work list is a top priority for me. I usually write it down and attach it to my desk, which helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important tasks.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện về ngữ pháp và sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh việc chia câu không hợp lý và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến việc sử dụng thì và số nhiều đúng cách.

예시: Well, some people prefer to work and study spontaneously, so making a list might feel restrictive to them. They may feel less free and therefore choose not to make lists.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến việc phát âm và ngữ pháp, tránh chia câu không hợp lý và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, câu "I prefer to. To make a list on my phone over then that on people list." nên được nối lại và sửa lỗi để rõ nghĩa hơn.

예시: I always have my phone with me, so I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper. Sometimes I forget the paper list at home, so using my phone is more convenient for me.

× Because it helps me to stay organized and ensures that I don't forget any. Important items.

✓ Because it helps me to stay organized and ensures that I don't forget any important items.

The sentence is incorrectly split into two parts, causing a sentence fragment. 'Important items' should be connected to the previous sentence to form a complete sentence.

× Moreover, it would save me time and effort when I go shop.

✓ Moreover, it would save me time and effort when I go shopping.

The verb 'go' should be followed by the '-ing' form 'shopping' to indicate the activity of shopping.

× I'm a kind of well disciplined girl so making a work list is the top. Text before I. Attached to my desk.

✓ I'm a kind of well-disciplined girl, so making a work list is the top text before me, attached to my desk.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Well disciplined' should be hyphenated as 'well-disciplined'. The phrase 'top. Text before I. Attached to my desk.' is fragmented and unclear; it should be combined and corrected for clarity.

× And as a result. It helps me stay more organized an ensure that I don't forget any important things.

✓ And as a result, it helps me stay more organized and ensures that I don't forget any important things.

The sentence has a fragment and a missing conjunction. 'An' should be 'and', and 'ensure' should be 'ensures' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Well because some people love to work and studies spontaneously, so making a list when working or studying may be restrictive to them.

✓ Well, because some people love to work and study spontaneously, making a list when working or studying may be restrictive to them.

The conjunction 'so' is unnecessary and causes redundancy. Also, 'studies' should be 'study' to match the verb form after 'love to'.

× An they will be. They will feel less freedom an maybe. They don't.

✓ And they will be. They will feel less freedom and maybe they don't.

The sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect conjunctions 'An' instead of 'And'. The phrase 'maybe. They don't.' is incomplete and unclear; it should be connected properly.

× I always have my phone on my hand so I prefer to. To make a list on my phone over then that on people list.

✓ I always have my phone in my hand, so I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on a paper list.

The preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to holding something in the hand. 'Over then that on people list' is incorrect and should be 'rather than on a paper list'.

× Sometimes I forgot the paper one at home.

✓ Sometimes I forget the paper one at home.

The sentence is in present tense context, so 'forgot' (past tense) should be 'forget' (present tense) to maintain tense consistency.

× So I think it's not convenient for me and it phone is really better.

✓ So I think it's not convenient for me, and the phone is really better.

The phrase 'it phone' is incorrect; it should be 'the phone'. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate the clauses.