List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo bhag ma bhul haru chan jasle gardaa English natural ra effective hudaina. Tapai le sentence haru lai sajilo ra spashta banau, jasma tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra thap bibaran haru sametnu parcha. Linking words jastai 'so', 'then', 'because' prayog garnu hos jasle kura haru logically jodnecha.

예시: Usually, I try to remember the items I need to buy before going shopping. However, if there are many things, I write a list on my phone to avoid forgetting anything.

제안: Tapai ko uttar ma sentence haru chhoto chhoto ra alikati asamjhana jasto cha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra thap bibaran haru jodne bela ma linking words jastai 'because', 'so', 'therefore' prayog garnu hos. Tapai ko vocabulary lai thap samriddha banaunu parcha ra sentence haru lai natural banau.

예시: Yes, I make a list of tasks I need to complete in the coming week because I work as a marketing executive. This helps me plan and execute my work efficiently.

제안: Tapai ko uttar ma clarity ra coherence ko kami cha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra thap bibaran haru logical linking words sanga jodne hos. Tapai le specific ra relevant vocabulary prayog garnu parcha ra sentence haru lai sajilo ra bujhna sajilo banau.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory. Also, they might feel that making lists limits their flexibility to handle unexpected situations.

제안: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo bhag ma spashta cha tara thap linking words jastai 'because', 'so' prayog garnu hos jasle kura haru logically jodnecha. Tapai le sentence haru lai thulo ra natural banau ra redundancy hataunu parcha.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I carry it all the time. This way, I can set alarms to remind me of tasks, and I write the list in English to help me remember easily.

× Normally when I go to shopping, I tried to memorize the things that I need to buy a after I go to the market and I cannot go to the market.

✓ Normally when I go shopping, I try to memorize the things that I need to buy after I go to the market.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Go to shopping' should be 'go shopping' (verb + -ing form issue, but here it's a fixed expression). 'Tried' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'try' to match 'Normally' and 'I go'. Also, 'a after' is incorrect and should be 'after'. Use present tense consistently for habitual actions.

× And is there a lot of things?

✓ And are there a lot of things?

The verb 'is' does not agree with the plural noun 'things'. The correct verb form is 'are' for plural subjects. This is a subject-verb agreement error related to singular and plural forms.

× Then I then I write it down on on my phone in. I'm reminders are two list.

✓ Then I write it down on my phone in my reminders as a list.

The prepositions 'on on' and 'in' are incorrectly used and repeated. The phrase should be 'write it down on my phone in my reminders as a list' to correctly express where the list is saved. Also, 'I'm reminders are two list' is unclear and corrected to 'in my reminders as a list' for clarity.

× Yes, I make a list. For what I do, what I do in. The coming 7 days of the week for my work as I am currently working at the marketing executive I need to make.

✓ Yes, I make a list of what I will do in the coming 7 days of the week for my work as I am currently working as a marketing executive and need to make

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used; it should be 'of' to indicate the content of the list. Also, 'working at the marketing executive' is incorrect; it should be 'working as a marketing executive'. The sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.

× A plan. To execute for the remaining 7 days of the week.

✓ a plan to execute for the remaining 7 days of the week.

The sentence is fragmented and incomplete. It should be combined with the previous sentence to form a complete thought. Fragmented sentences reduce clarity and coherence.

× people don't like making list as.

✓ people don't like making lists because

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' when referring to the general activity. Also, 'as' is incomplete here and should be replaced with 'because' to introduce a reason.

× They can memorize things on their on their own mind or they want to.

✓ They can memorize things in their own mind or they want to.

The phrase 'on their own mind' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' for mental processes. Also, 'on their' is repeated unnecessarily.

× They don't want to be prepared for what comes next in there. Delisa, do they want to make things go in around? Like an welcome smart comes next this.

✓ They don't want to be prepared for what comes next in their lives; they want to let things happen naturally, like a welcome surprise coming next.

The original sentences are unclear and contain incorrect conjunctions and word choices. 'There. Delisa' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'their lives'. The sentence needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× As I have my phone for. 24 hours.

✓ As I have my phone for 24 hours.

The period after 'for' is incorrect and breaks the sentence unnaturally. The phrase should be continuous without a period.

× I I like to make placed on my phone so that I can set an alarm alarm for what I what I need to do in in future.

✓ I like to make plans on my phone so that I can set an alarm for what I need to do in the future.

'Make placed' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make plans'. Also, 'alarm alarm' and 'what I what I' are repetitions and should be corrected. 'In in future' should be 'in the future'.

× And when I go to market I try I need to do it in English so that I can remember it easily.

✓ And when I go to the market, I try to do it in English so that I can remember it easily.

The phrase 'go to market' needs the definite article 'the' to be correct. Also, 'I try I need to do it' is awkward and should be 'I try to do it'.