List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to improve your sentence structure and grammar to make your answer clearer and more natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically, and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'what I want,' you could say 'I can remember what to buy.'

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it saves time and helps me remember what to buy. Moreover, it prevents me from purchasing unnecessary items, which helps me save money.

제안: Focus on clear and correct grammar to express your ideas effectively. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid unclear phrases. For example, explain how making lists helps you organise tasks and improve efficiency.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me organise my tasks effectively. This way, I can prioritise what needs to be done and complete my work more efficiently.

제안: Work on clarity and vocabulary to express your ideas more precisely. Use linking words to connect your reasons and provide specific examples. Avoid unclear or incorrect words like 'rejective' and 'friend down'.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or boring. For instance, they prefer to remember things rather than writing them down. Additionally, some feel that lists can be too restrictive and limit their flexibility.

제안: Improve pronunciation and grammar for clarity. Complete your sentences and use linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example, mention convenience and accessibility as reasons for using your phone.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient and easy to access. For example, I can quickly add items whenever I think of something, and since I always have my phone with me, especially at the grocery store, I never forget what to buy.

× I will make a list when the shop because it is safe time an I can know what I want to do what I want to buy an is also make me save money because I don't buy anything is unnecessary.

✓ I will make a list when I shop because it saves time and I can know what I want to buy. It also helps me save money because I don't buy anything unnecessary.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'when the shop' instead of 'when I shop' and has awkward phrasing. The future tense 'will make' is appropriate here. The phrase 'safe time' should be 'saves time'. Also, 'what I want to do what I want to buy' is redundant and confusing; it should be simplified to 'what I want to buy'. The phrase 'an is also make me save money' is grammatically incorrect and should be 'It also helps me save money'. The phrase 'anything is unnecessary' should be 'anything unnecessary'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I will make a list when the shop because it is safe time an I can know what I want to do what I want to buy an is also make me save money because I don't buy anything is unnecessary.

✓ I will make a list when I shop because it saves time and I can know what I want to buy. It also helps me save money because I don't buy anything unnecessary.

The pronoun 'it' is used ambiguously in the original sentence. 'When the shop' is incorrect; it should be 'when I shop' to correctly refer to the subject performing the action. Also, 'an is also make me save money' lacks a clear subject pronoun; replacing it with 'It also helps me save money' clarifies the meaning.

× I will make a list when the shop because it is safe time an I can know what I want to do what I want to buy an is also make me save money because I don't buy anything is unnecessary.

✓ I will make a list when I shop because it saves time and I can know what I want to buy. It also helps me save money because I don't buy anything unnecessary.

The original sentence uses 'an' instead of the correct conjunction 'and'. Correct conjunctions are necessary to connect ideas properly. Replacing 'an' with 'and' improves sentence flow and clarity.

× Yes, I will make a list for my work because is affectively an it says Tom. I can know what I want, what I need to do and. Is my way. More effect.

✓ Yes, I will make a list for my work because it is effective and it helps me. I can know what I want and what I need to do. It is my way to be more effective.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun references and incomplete sentences. 'Because is affectively an it says Tom' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'because it is effective and it helps me'. The phrase 'Is my way. More effect.' is fragmented and should be combined into 'It is my way to be more effective.' Proper pronoun use and sentence completeness improve clarity.

× Yes, I will make a list for my work because is affectively an it says Tom. I can know what I want, what I need to do and. Is my way. More effect.

✓ Yes, I will make a list for my work because it is effective and it helps me. I can know what I want and what I need to do. It is my way to be more effective.

The original sentence contains fragmented sentences and unclear phrases. Proper sentence structure requires complete sentences with clear subjects and verbs. Combining fragments and clarifying meaning improves readability and grammatical correctness.

× I think some people don't like making lists because they fight it time consuming or boring. For example, they might refer to keep things in their memory friend down, writing them down. Also, some people feel that list can be too rejective. Anne.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or boring. For example, they might prefer to keep things in their memory rather than writing them down. Also, some people feel that lists can be too restrictive.

The original sentence misuses 'fight' instead of 'find', 'refer to keep' instead of 'prefer to keep', and 'friend down' which is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'rather than'. 'List can be too rejective' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'restrictive'. Correct conjunctions and word choices are necessary for clear meaning.

× I think some people don't like making lists because they fight it time consuming or boring. For example, they might refer to keep things in their memory friend down, writing them down. Also, some people feel that list can be too rejective. Anne.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or boring. For example, they might prefer to keep things in their memory rather than writing them down. Also, some people feel that lists can be too restrictive.

The original sentence uses 'list' in singular when referring to lists in general; the plural 'lists' is appropriate here. Also, 'too rejective' is incorrect; 'too restrictive' is the correct adjective. Proper quantifiers and adjective forms are important for grammatical accuracy.

× I re ferd 2 met list on my phone because it's very convenient and easy to access. For example I can quickly an item whenever I think of something and I always have my phone with me, especially when I go to the grocery store. This way I don't.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and easy to access. For example, I can quickly add an item whenever I think of something and I always have my phone with me, especially when I go to the grocery store. This way I don't forget anything.

The original sentence contains several errors: 're ferd 2 met list' should be 'prefer to make a list'; 'quickly an item' should be 'quickly add an item'; the sentence ends abruptly with 'This way I don't.' which is incomplete and should be completed as 'This way I don't forget anything.' Correct pronoun and verb usage, as well as sentence completion, are necessary for clarity.