List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız doğal değil ve anlam açısından biraz karışık. Alışveriş yaparken neden liste yapmadığınızı daha açık ve net ifade edin. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha kısa ve etkili tutmaya çalışın.

예시: No, I don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. I enjoy choosing items based on my mood rather than a fixed plan.

제안: Cevabınızda anlam belirsizliği var ve cümleleriniz birbirine bağlanmamış. İşinizle ilgili liste yapmama nedeninizi daha açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde ifade edin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlayın.

예시: No, I don't make a list for my work because my tasks are simple and routine. For example, when I make coffee, I follow the usual steps, so a list is unnecessary.

제안: Cevabınız çok belirsiz ve eksik. İnsanların neden liste yapmayı sevmediğini daha açık ve detaylı açıklayın. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi tam ve anlamlı yapmaya dikkat edin.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and prefer to be spontaneous. Also, they might feel confident enough to remember their tasks without writing them down.

제안: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam bozuklukları var. Tercihinizi net bir şekilde ifade edin ve nedenlerini açıklayın. Cümlelerinizi daha akıcı ve mantıklı hale getirin.

예시: I don't usually make lists, but if I do, I prefer paper because I can carry it easily and writing helps me remember better.

× No, I don't make a list when I shop because I like to buy something spontaneously in I like to buy. Anything.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop because I like to buy things spontaneously.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains redundant phrases, making it unclear. Simplifying and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I don't make a list for my work 'cause there's no need to list for my work.

✓ No, I don't make a list for my work because there's no need to make a list for my work.

The phrase 'need to list' is incorrect; the verb 'make' should be used with 'list' to form 'make a list'. Also, 'cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because' for clarity.

× I work in a coffee shop and bookstore. I'm making a coffee I have received for making a coffee, then there's no need to list.

✓ I work in a coffee shop and bookstore. I make coffee when I receive orders, so there's no need to make a list.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper conjunctions and verb forms. Correcting verb tenses and adding conjunctions clarifies the meaning.

× Maybe they're getting more. Fun for days and. Maybe they don't need to make a list. Well, you know.

✓ Maybe they enjoy spontaneity more and don't need to make a list. Well, you know.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining ideas into a coherent sentence improves readability and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer on paper because I can bring it everywhere with with me and. Writing something, it's helped me.

✓ I prefer paper because I can bring it everywhere with me, and writing things down helps me.

The phrase 'prefer on paper' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer paper'. Also, 'with with me' is a repetition error, and the sentence structure needs correction for clarity.