List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, be specific about how making a list helps you when shopping. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need to buy. For example, before going to the supermarket, I list essentials like bread and toothpaste. This way, I avoid forgetting anything important and save time during shopping.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Please try to express your ideas clearly, use correct sentence structures, and explain how making lists helps your work or study. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

예시: Yes, I always make lists for my work because they help me set small goals. Completing these tasks gives me a sense of achievement and motivates me to continue working effectively.

제안: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to act spontaneously without planning. They may find lists restrictive and feel that planning takes too much time or effort.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Please express your preference clearly and explain the reasons logically. Use linking words and specific details to support your opinion.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and environmentally friendly than using paper. Also, I can easily edit or add items anytime on my mobile device.

× Sure, I always make a list of my shop this because mainly this can help me. Remind and remind me once things I need to buy, for example.

✓ Sure, I always make a shopping list because it mainly helps me remember the things I need to buy, for example.

The original sentence has unclear structure and incorrect word order, making it difficult to understand. Reorganizing the sentence and using correct phrases improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Before shopping in the supermarkets and at least all things I want such as the. Bread or some tooth purse and I can.

✓ Before shopping in the supermarket, I make sure to have all the things I want, such as bread or some toothpaste.

The original sentence incorrectly uses plural 'supermarkets' and 'tooth purse' which is incorrect. 'Supermarket' is better in singular here, and 'toothpaste' is the correct noun. Also, the sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring.

× Sure, I always always list as list for my work and speak 'cause my knees can make surfel mini goals and.

✓ Sure, I always make a list for my work because it helps me set several mini goals.

The original sentence contains unclear words and structure ('speak', 'my knees', 'surfel'). Correcting these to meaningful words and proper sentence structure improves understanding.

× And this goes is helpful for my studying and work.

✓ This is helpful for my studying and work.

The phrase 'this goes is' is incorrect and redundant. Simplifying to 'This is' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Mr. Cost finishing small Google can give encourage me through the mud.

✓ Finishing small goals can encourage me to keep going.

The original sentence contains nonsensical phrases ('Mr. Cost', 'small Google', 'through the mud'). Replacing with correct words and structure conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× Is because some people. May want to. Straightforward to do something with our plan. Analyst and.

✓ It is because some people may want to be straightforward and do something without a plan.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words ('Analyst and'). Combining fragments and correcting word choice improves clarity.

× They don't want to think a lot before they do something.

✓ They don't want to think a lot before doing something.

The original sentence is understandable but can be improved by using the gerund form 'doing' after 'before' for grammatical correctness.

× I'm prepared to make that list in my phone is because.

✓ I'm prepared to make the list on my phone because

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Correcting to a complete and natural phrase improves clarity.

× Anything less on the paper is. Very graceful and not is most eagle friendly.

✓ Making a list on paper is inconvenient and not very eco-friendly.

The original sentence misuses adjectives ('graceful', 'most eagle friendly') which do not fit the context. Replacing with appropriate adjectives clarifies the meaning.

× Over making this in on the mobile phone is small convenience and I can make them.

✓ Making lists on the mobile phone is more convenient and I can make them easily.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and unclear phrases. Correcting prepositions and adding clarity improves the sentence.