List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答えが不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より明確で簡潔な表現を使い、文法を正しくすることが重要です。また、理由を述べる際に論理的なつながりを示す接続詞を使いましょう。

예시: No, I don't make a shopping list because I can remember the things I need. Also, making a list takes time, so I think it's a waste of time.

제안: 答えが不明瞭で、質問に直接答えていません。文法や語彙の誤りも多いです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。

예시: No, I don't make a list for my work or study because I prefer to focus on studying without distractions. I find that making lists doesn't help me concentrate.

제안: 答えが断片的で意味が取りにくいです。理由を述べる際は、文をつなげて論理的に説明し、具体的な内容を加えると良いでしょう。

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and time-consuming. Also, some people feel they can remember things without writing them down.

제안: 文法や発音の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を述べる際は、接続詞を使って文をつなげ、明確に説明しましょう。

예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have my phone with me. If I use paper, I have to remember to bring it, which is less convenient.

× No, I don't make Arias when I shop be 'cause I can remember just things which I want to.

✓ No, I don't make lists when I shop because I can remember just the things I want.

The word 'Arias' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'lists'. Also, 'just things which I want to' is awkward; it should be 'just the things I want'. This corrects quantifier usage and clarity.

× By so I don't have to make arrest and also.

✓ So I don't have to make a list, and also,

The phrase 'By so' is incorrect; it should be 'So'. 'Arrest' is a mishearing or typo for 'a list'. The conjunction 'and also' should be connected properly to the sentence.

× It takes a long time so it waste of time.

✓ It takes a long time, so it is a waste of time.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' before 'a waste of time'. Adding it corrects the sentence structure.

× No, I don't make war E for my work or study be 'cause when I study subject.

✓ No, I don't make a list for my work or study because when I study a subject,

'war E' is a mishearing or typo for 'a list'. Also, 'study subject' needs an article 'a' before 'subject'.

× I think it is important to study hard without remembering.

✓ I think it is important to study hard without making a list.

The original sentence is unclear; 'without remembering' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'without making a list'.

× I think it's a waste of time so and many people think.

✓ I think it's a waste of time, and many people think so.

The phrase 'so and many people think' is incorrect. It should be 'and many people think so' to be grammatically correct.

× And many people can. Anything without making our east so they don't.

✓ And many people can do anything without making a list, so they don't.

The sentence is fragmented and contains errors like 'our east' instead of 'a list'. Correcting these makes the sentence coherent.

× I prefer to make arrest on my phone bill cause.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because

'arrest' is a mishearing or typo for 'a list'. 'bill cause' is incorrect; it should be 'because'.

× Where if I make great on paper, I have to bring the paper anytime but.

✓ Whereas if I make a list on paper, I have to bring the paper anytime, but

'great' is a mishearing or typo for 'a list'. 'anytime' should be 'anytime' or 'all the time'. 'Where' should be 'Whereas' to contrast the ideas.

× If I make a race on phone, I always bring my home.

✓ If I make a list on my phone, I always bring it with me.

'make a race' is a mishearing or typo for 'make a list'. 'bring my home' is incorrect; it should be 'bring it with me'.