List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，存在语法和词汇错误。建议简洁明了地表达购物时会列清单的习惯，并使用连贯的句子。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember what I need to buy and saves time.

제안: 回答内容混乱，表达不连贯，词汇使用错误。建议直接回答是否为工作列清单，并说明其效果，使用清晰的句子和具体细节。

예시: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work. It helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important tasks.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，难以理解。建议用简单句表达原因，如不喜欢计划或觉得麻烦。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or prefer to be spontaneous.

제안: 回答表达不流畅，语法和词汇错误较多。建议清晰表达偏好并给出理由，使用连贯句子。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I won't lose them like paper lists.

× Well, I sometimes make an E when I show up.

✓ Well, I sometimes make a list when I show up.

这里的'make an E'显然是错误的表达，应该是'make a list'，即制作购物清单。'make'后面需要接名词，不能接单个字母'E'。

× Before I go shopping, I may write down the items that I want to buy.

✓ Before I go shopping, I usually write down the items that I want to buy.

这里用'may'表示可能性，但根据语境，学生想表达的是习惯性动作，应该用'adverbs of frequency'如'usually'，而不是'may'。

× And when I run it to shop I can use them.

✓ And when I go shopping, I can use them.

'run it to shop'结构不正确，正确表达是'go shopping'，表示去购物。

× Well, I sometimes make the knees before I go shopping too.

✓ Well, I sometimes make the lists before I go shopping too.

'the knees'显然是错误的单词，应该是'the lists'，表示购物清单。

× Remember what I really should buy?

✓ I remember what I really should buy.

原句是疑问句，但语境应为陈述句，表达记得要买什么。

× For example, our might.

✓ For example, our list.

'our might'无意义，应该是'our list'，表示我们的清单。

× Write down closer raise in the household items so I don't forget anything important.

✓ Write down closer prices in the household items so I don't forget anything important.

'closer raise'不合适，应该是'closer prices'，表示更接近的价格。

× I think perhaps they are not the persons that that.

✓ I think perhaps they are not the persons that do that.

句子缺少谓语动词，应该加上'do that'表示他们不做那件事。

× You yarn make plans.

✓ You don't make plans.

'yarn'是错误单词，应该是'don't'，表示你不做计划。

× I prefer to make a nice on my phone because.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because

'make a nice'错误，应该是'make a list'，表示制作清单。

× Is. More convenience and. The papery.

✓ It is more convenient and the paper one

句子断裂且用词错误，应该是'It is more convenient and the paper one'，表示手机更方便，纸质的那个...。

× I wrote always delost.

✓ I always lose the paper one.

'wrote always delost'语法错误，正确表达是'I always lose the paper one'，表示我总是丢失纸质清单。