List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me control my spending. For example, I write down only the items I need to avoid buying unnecessary things. This way, I can save money and shop more efficiently.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý tưởng. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm, đồng thời nên giải thích rõ lý do tại sao danh sách không hiệu quả. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

예시: Yes, I sometimes make a list for my work, but it doesn't always help because I tend to be lazy. Also, I often lose the paper where I wrote the list, so it is not very effective.

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh những phần không rõ nghĩa.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they often forget to check them or lose the paper. I think using a digital list on their phone might be more effective and convenient.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Tránh lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không phù hợp. Trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích lý do cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because paper lists can easily get lost. Digital lists are more convenient and effective since they are less likely to be misplaced.

× Well, I do make a list when I shall be 'cause when I go shopping I need to spend.

✓ Well, I do make a list because when I go shopping I need to spend.

The use of 'shall be' is incorrect here. The sentence is about a habitual action, so simple present tense is appropriate. 'Shall be' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context.

× A mount of money which I try to save it.

✓ An amount of money which I try to save.

The phrase 'A mount' is a misspelling of 'An amount'. Also, the pronoun 'it' is redundant after 'which'. Correct article 'an' is used before vowel sound.

× So yeah, I need me when I shot.

✓ So yeah, I need to make a list when I shop.

The phrase 'I need me' is incorrect; it should be 'I need to make a list'. Also, 'shot' is a misspelling of 'shop'. The pronoun usage and verb form are incorrect.

× Anyone ever I don't need.

✓ So I can buy whatever I need and avoid buying what I don't need.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks proper structure and connectors. The correction provides a clear and complete sentence.

× Well, I do have made a list from my work but it doesn't work quite often because I'm quite lazy and also when making list counselor lot not sure paper so it doesn't work for as soon as it could be.

✓ Well, I have made a list for my work but it doesn't work quite often because I'm quite lazy and also when making the list, I often lose the paper so it doesn't work as well as it could.

The phrase 'I do have made' is incorrect; it should be 'I have made'. 'From my work' should be 'for my work'. 'Counselor lot not sure paper' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'I often lose the paper'. The sentence needed restructuring for clarity.

× Well, because they sometimes forget to check it or lose the paper.

✓ Well, because they sometimes forget to check the list or lose the paper.

The pronoun 'it' is vague; specifying 'the list' clarifies the meaning.

× So the enemies except ask.

✓ So the answer is except that.

The original sentence is unclear and likely a mishearing. It is omitted as it does not form a meaningful sentence.

× Well I think that use a digital is on their phone, it might be more effective.

✓ Well, I think that using a digital list on their phone might be more effective.

The phrase 'that use a digital is on their phone' is incorrect. 'Using a digital list' is the correct gerund form. The sentence needed rephrasing for clarity.

× Where are preferred to Michael is on my phone because if the list is on the small piece of paper it can easy to get lost.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because if the list is on a small piece of paper, it can easily get lost.

'Where are preferred to Michael' is incorrect and unclear. Correct pronoun 'I' and verb 'prefer' are used. 'Easy' should be 'easily' as an adverb modifying 'get lost'.

× Where I think used in digital list under phones might be more convenient and effective size, they are less likely to misplace.

✓ I think using a digital list on phones might be more convenient and effective since they are less likely to be misplaced.

'Where I think used in digital list under phones' is incorrect. Correct gerund form 'using' and prepositions 'on phones' are used. 'Size' is likely a mishearing and replaced with 'since'. Passive form 'be misplaced' is used correctly.