List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如时态错误和句子结构混乱。建议练习正确使用时态和简洁表达，避免重复和不连贯。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because if I want to buy many things, I might forget some. Making a list helps me remember what I need to buy.

제안: 回答中有很多断断续续的句子，表达不清晰。建议练习连贯表达，使用完整句子，并且明确说明原因和效果。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because my tasks are complex and numerous. Making a list helps me ensure that I complete everything on time.

제안: 回答缺乏连贯性和完整句子，表达不清楚。建议练习使用连词连接句子，清晰表达观点。

예시: Some people may find making lists troublesome because they prefer to do things spontaneously and don't like following a fixed plan.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议练习使用完整句子，避免重复，并且用连词使句子更连贯。

예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I might forget paper lists. Nowadays, people always carry their phones, so it's more convenient.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I was shop.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I shop.

这里的动作是习惯性的，现在时态更合适，不能用过去时。

× Be 'cause if you want by a lot of things you may forget something, so make a list can help you.

✓ Because if you want to buy a lot of things, you may forget something, so making a list can help you.

动词buy前应使用不定式to buy，且make a list应改为动名词making a list作为主语。

× Remember was your want to buy?

✓ Do you remember what you want to buy?

原句中was用错，且句子结构不完整，应使用疑问句结构。

× Uh, it is because my work is. Come fly, come please complete.

✓ Uh, it is because my work is busy and needs to be completed quickly.

原句结构混乱，表达不清，应调整为完整句子。

× So I need to make a list. To make sure. What? I need to do.

✓ So I need to make a list to make sure what I need to do.

原句断句不当，应合并为完整句子。

× Maybe people think make list? Is. Trouble.

✓ Maybe people think making lists is troublesome.

原句缺少主语和谓语，且make list应改为making lists。

× And. They like to what they want to do and they don't like. Follow the list.

✓ And they like to do what they want and they don't like to follow the list.

原句缺少动词不定式to，且句子断裂。

× Be 'cause. If you make a list on paper, you may forget your paper and.

✓ Because if you make a list on paper, you may forget your paper.

句尾多余and，应去掉。

× Nowadays, people, you really take your phone, everything.

✓ Nowadays, people really take their phones everywhere.

原句结构混乱，代词使用不当，应调整为完整句子。