Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答，再补充一个具体原因即可。表达“跟着歌手唱”时用 sing along with other singers，不说 follow with；“表达情绪”与听别人唱歌的关系可以说得更自然。避免重复使用“sing/song”。

예시: Yes, I do. Listening to other people sing helps me relax, especially after a busy day. Sometimes I sing along with them, which helps me express my feelings.

제안: 回答“上过课”后，补充课程经历或学习成果。注意时态一致：过去的经历用 took、entered、won；competition 应为复数时说 these competitions。表达“获得奖励”可用 won some prizes，且无需重复强调比赛很多。

예시: Yes, I have. I took singing lessons when I was younger, and they helped me prepare for a few competitions. I won some prizes, which made me really happy, especially because my parents were proud of me.

제안: 注意 saying 应为 singing；“让我更开心”可说 make me feel happier。后半部分想法较多且衔接不完整，建议围绕一个原因展开，并用 through songs 或 by listening to songs 表达理解他人情感；others’ feelings 需要所有格。

예시: Yes, I do. Singing usually makes me feel happier, especially when I’m stressed. I also enjoy the emotions in the lyrics, because they sometimes help me understand how other people feel.

제안: 表达基本清楚，但“resumes and temples from. Sinners”难以理解，可能是发音或词汇识别错误；请确认想表达的内容。避免重复使用 professional，可具体说明学过的技巧，例如呼吸、音准或节奏。“这些课程很有趣”可说 the lessons were enjoyable。

예시: Yes, I have. I took several singing lessons, where my teacher taught me how to control my breathing and stay in tune. I found the lessons both useful and enjoyable.

제안: 回答对象明确，也给出了原因，但后两句语法不完整且有重复。可以说 sing for my friends to show my appreciation；“表达对朋友的爱”在此语境下用 show them how much I appreciate them 更自然。注意不要重复 to。

예시: I’d like to sing for my friends. They’re always there for me, so singing a song they enjoy would be a nice way to show them how much I appreciate them.

제안: 观点明确，但例子与“带来快乐”的联系不够直接。建议用日常场景说明唱歌如何让人开心，例如和朋友一起唱歌。注意过去时用 sang；modern country 不自然，可说 nowadays 或 in modern society；避免句中不必要的停顿。

예시: Yes, definitely. Singing can lift people’s mood, especially when they sing together with friends or family. It can also help people express their feelings, so I think it brings people closer and makes them happier.

× What's more, I can also express my emotions when I follow with other singers who sing a song.

✓ What's more, I can also express my emotions when I follow other singers who sing a song.

表示“跟随某人”时，follow 后面直接接宾语，不需要加 with。

× I remember that I had so many competitions and I get some more rewards from this singing competitions.

✓ I remember that I had so many competitions and I got some more rewards from these singing competitions.

这句话描述过去参加比赛和获得奖励的经历，因此 get 应使用过去式 got。

× I remember that I had so many competitions and I get some more rewards from this singing competitions.

✓ I remember that I had so many competitions and I got some more rewards from these singing competitions.

singing competitions 是复数名词，前面的指示限定词应使用复数形式 these，而不是 this。

× And pay attention to others feelings.

✓ I can also pay attention to other people's feelings.

原句缺少明确的主语和完整的谓语结构，单独使用 And pay attention... 与前文连接不完整。建议补出主语和助动词，例如 I can also pay attention...。

× And pay attention to others feelings.

✓ I can also pay attention to other people's feelings.

others 是代词，不能直接放在 feelings 前表示所属关系。可以使用 other people's（其他人的），或写成 others' feelings（其他人的感受）。

× Our teachers taught us how to sing a song very professionally and we learnt resumes and temples from. Sinners.

✓ Our teachers taught us how to sing a song very professionally, and we learnt resumes and temples from singers.

from 需要连接其宾语；把 from 和后面的 singers 分开成两个句子，会造成句子结构断裂。应将 from singers 连在一起。

× So I want to to express my loves for my friends and singing some songs.

✓ So I want to express my love for my friends and sing some songs.

这里的 love 表示对朋友的感情，是不可数用法，通常用单数形式 love，而不是 loves。

× So I want to to express my loves for my friends and singing some songs.

✓ So I want to express my love for my friends and sing some songs.

want to 后面应接动词原形。并列结构中，express 和 sing 应保持形式一致；不能在 to 后使用 singing。

× They like is a very good way.

✓ They like it, and singing is a very good way to express my love for them.

原句中 They like 后面缺少宾语，而 is 前也缺少合适的主语，导致两个句子结构混在一起。应补全 like 的宾语，并明确说明什么是一种好方法。

× I think in ancient times our ancestors always sing some songs to express their loves for their children and their wives.

✓ I think in ancient times our ancestors always sang some songs to express their love for their children and their wives.

in ancient times 表示过去的时间，因此 sing 应改为过去式 sang。

× I think in ancient times our ancestors always sing some songs to express their loves for their children and their wives.

✓ I think in ancient times our ancestors always sang some songs to express their love for their children and their wives.

这里的 love 表示对家人的感情，通常作为不可数名词使用，应使用单数形式 love，而不是 loves。

× So I think. In modern country, this is also a good way for us to express our emotions.

✓ So I think. In a modern country, this is also a good way for us to express our emotions.

country 是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词。这里可以加不定冠词 a，写成 in a modern country。