Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly and use the correct structure: “I love listening to Indian music,” not “I love listening the Indian music.” Avoid unclear phrases such as “the Wen Music album” and “the few favourite there is.” Name a specific singer, song, or album and explain briefly why you enjoy it. Use linking words such as “especially” or “because” to connect your ideas.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy listening to other people sing, especially Indian music. I often listen to songs by Arijit Singh because his voice is emotional and soothing. I also enjoy watching live music performances when I have time.

제안: Use the present perfect in the question’s answer: “No, I haven’t,” rather than “No, I did not.” Avoid repetition of “if I get a chance” and the unclear phrase “always already to learn.” Give a clear future plan and one reason, using a linking word such as “because.”

예시: No, I haven’t taken a singing class yet. However, I’d love to take one in the future because it would help me improve my pronunciation and confidence. I think learning to sing would also be an enjoyable new skill.

제안: Your main idea is clear, but avoid repeating “but” and replace “good at vocal” with “good at singing” or “a good singer.” The phrase “it’s my happy thing” is unnatural; say that singing makes you feel happy or relaxed. Add a specific situation, such as singing while showering, driving, or doing housework.

예시: Yes, I do like singing, although I’m not a very good singer. I’m basically a bathroom singer, but I also sing while doing housework or driving. It makes me feel happy and relaxed, even when I’ve had a stressful day.

제안: Use a clear time expression, such as “When I was in Grade 7,” and explain what happened in a logical order. Replace “I just busy” with “I was busy” and “I denied” with “I turned down the opportunity.” Finish with a complete explanation of your regret instead of ending with an unclear phrase.

예시: I had a brief opportunity to learn how to sing when I was in Grade 7. One of my teachers offered to teach me, but I turned it down because I was busy with other projects. I regret that decision now because I would probably feel more confident about singing today.

제안: This answer has a clear audience and specific occasions, but reduce hesitation and repetition of “maybe.” Use “If I had the chance, I would...” for a hypothetical situation, and say “so they would know how much I love them.” Organize the answer into the people, the song, and the occasion.

예시: I’d love to sing for my children and my husband. I might write a short song for them so they would know how much I love them. I’d probably sing it on their birthdays or another special family occasion.

제안: State your opinion directly and avoid the unclear phrase “if people feel praising.” You could say that people use singing as a form of therapy or emotional release. Explain the effect clearly, use subject–verb agreement in “singing brings,” and give a specific example of how singing can help people who feel stressed or sad.

예시: Yes, definitely. Singing can make people feel happier because it allows them to express their emotions and release stress. Some people even use music therapy when they feel depressed or anxious. Personally, I often sing when I’m in a bad mood, and it helps me feel more positive.

× I love listening the Indian music.

✓ I love listening to Indian music.

The verb listen is followed by the preposition to. Indian music is used without the because music is an uncountable noun when referring to music in general.

× the few favourite there is like Rigid Star

✓ One of my few favourites is Rigid Star.

Favourite must be plural after few. However, when referring to one item, use the singular form one of my few favourites.

× the few favourite there is like Rigid Star

✓ One of my few favourites is Rigid Star.

The subject is one, which is singular, so the correct verb is is, not are. The phrase one of my few favourites also creates a clear grammatical structure.

× No, I did not.

✓ No, I have not.

The question asks whether you have ever taken a singing class. For experiences up to the present, use the present perfect form have not rather than the simple past did not.

× In future if I have a chance I really like to take.

✓ In the future, if I have a chance, I would really like to take one.

Would like is used to express a desire or willingness in a hypothetical situation. The pronoun one replaces singing class and avoids repeating the noun.

× In future if I have a chance

✓ In the future, if I have a chance

The fixed expression is in the future, so the definite article the is required.

× Why not it's a new skill to learn always already to learn something that I like

✓ Why not? It is always good to learn a new skill, especially something that I like.

The original wording combines several ideas without a clear sentence structure. Separate the question from the explanation and place always before the adjective good.

× So I hundred percent sure that I will take if I get a chance.

✓ So I am one hundred percent sure that I will take one if I get a chance.

The sentence needs the linking verb am after the subject I. The pronoun one refers to a singing class.

× I do like singing but I'm not good at vocal.

✓ I do like singing, but I am not good at singing.

Vocal is an adjective and cannot be used as the noun after good at in this sentence. Singing is the appropriate gerund and functions as a noun here.

× I can say I'm a bathroom singer, but I sing wherever and it's my I think happy thing at least to do.

✓ I can say that I am a bathroom singer, but I sing wherever I am, and I think it is at least a happy thing for me to do.

The original sentence has an unclear clause structure and incorrectly places I think inside the noun phrase. Use complete clauses and place the phrase for me after happy thing.

× I still remember on I think on grade seven one of my teachers told me how to start singing.

✓ I still remember that, when I was in Grade Seven, one of my teachers told me how to start singing.

Use in, not on, with a school grade. The phrase when I was in Grade Seven clearly introduces the time reference.

× I was just busy with some other projects.

✓ I was just busy with some other projects.

This sentence is grammatically complete because it contains the subject I, the verb was, and the adjective busy. Using was is necessary because busy is an adjective.

× I am now regretting that why I did not there that.

✓ I regret that I did not do that then.

The past action requires the past form did not do. The word then is the correct adverb for referring to that earlier time. Do not use why after regret when stating the regretted action directly.

× Maybe I will write one little maybe song for them.

✓ Maybe I will write a little song for them.

Maybe should be placed at the beginning of the clause, and the article a is required before the singular countable noun song.

× That they will know that how much I love them.

✓ So that they will know how much I love them.

Use so that to express purpose. The word that should not be placed directly before the question phrase how much.

× I will sing on maybe on their birthday.

✓ I will sing, maybe on their birthday.

Use on once before a specific day or date. The repeated preposition is unnecessary.

× Or on special day.

✓ Or on a special day.

Special day is a singular countable noun, so it needs the indefinite article a when no particular day has been specified.

× Singing is one thing that people if people feel praising, they use as a therapy.

✓ Singing is something that people use as therapy when they feel depressed.

The original sentence contains an incomplete and repeated conditional clause. Use something that people use to introduce the purpose of singing, and use when to introduce the situation.

× If people feel praising

✓ If people feel depressed

Praising means expressing approval of someone and does not describe a negative emotional state. Depressed is the appropriate adjective for the intended meaning.

× I'm the one on count one on that one too.

✓ I am one of those people, too.

The original phrase does not form a meaningful grammatical structure. One of those people clearly expresses that the speaker also uses singing as therapy.

× That's the thing that bring the happiness to people.

✓ That is the thing that brings happiness to people.

The relative pronoun that refers to the singular noun thing, so the verb must be brings. Happiness is normally uncountable and does not need the article the when used generally.

× That bring the happiness to people.

✓ That brings happiness to people.

When happiness is discussed in a general sense, it is an uncountable noun and does not require the definite article the.

× Even they are depressed or whatever.

✓ Even when they are depressed or facing other difficulties.

Use even when to introduce a situation or condition. The conjunction when makes the relationship between singing and the situation clear.