Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更直接并且逻辑清晰。先用一句话直接回答问题，然后用1–2句具体说明原因并适当用连接词衔接。避免重复、犹豫词和不必要的细节（例如“every seconds”），用更地道的表达描述感受。

예시: No, I don't enjoy singing. I'm quite introverted and find loud singing uncomfortable, especially because my sister sings a lot at home, which annoys me. Therefore, I usually avoid joining in.

제안: 回答应更准确地表达经历并使用正确词汇和时态。先简短回答“yes/no”，然后说明细节（何时、在哪儿、学到什么或没学到什么），使用连词使句子流畅。注意发音相近词汇错误（seeing/chanting应为 singing）。

예시: Yes, I took mandatory music classes at school, but I didn't really learn how to sing well. The lessons focused more on theory than practical singing, so I didn't improve my voice.

제안: 回答要更简洁并集中于“想为谁唱”的核心信息。先明确回答，然后用1句具体说明原因。避免不相关信息（例如父亲职业无关紧要），并用恰当的形容词和连接词。

예시: If I could, I would sing for my family, because I feel most comfortable with them and it would make them happy. For example, I might sing a simple song for my parents at a family gathering.

제안: 回答要结构化：先给总体观点，然后解释原因并举例。避免语气词和夸张表达（如“Oh my God”）。注意语法（depends on their character; singing can relax them）。用连接词如“however”来对比个人观点。

예시: I think singing can make many people happy because it helps them relax and clear their minds. However, for some people like me, loud singing is stressful and not enjoyable.

제안: 回答要更清楚地表达条件关系并用正确词汇（singing skills, professional singer, attend concerts）。先给一般回答，再说明例外，并用连词如“if”或“but”。避免模糊或不连贯的短语。

예시: It depends on their singing skills. If someone sings poorly, I find it hard to listen, but I enjoy hearing talented or professional singers and would go to their concerts.

제안: 回答要用正确语法和时态，并明确说明是否参加过课程以及学到了什么。减少犹豫词并用1–2句补充细节（何时、内容、结果）。

예시: Yes, I attended compulsory singing classes at school, but they were short and focused on music theory, so I didn't really learn practical singing skills.

× She enjoys singing every day, every seconds.

✓ She enjoys singing every day, every second.

原句中使用了複數“seconds”與“every”搭配不正確。當使用“every + 單位”時，單位應為單數形式，如“every day”“every second”。建議記住“every”後接單數名詞的規則。

× I was bothered a lot.

✓ I am very bothered by it.

題目是在描述現在的感受，用過去式“was”不符合語境。應使用現在時表達持續的狀態。此外常用被動結構“be bothered by something”。建議使用現在時並注意被動語態的正確搭配。

× I hate it.

✓ I hate it.

該句語法正確，保留原句。

× the music lessons are essential in my school so I was faced it and I learned nothing about seeing or chanting.

✓ The music lessons are compulsory at my school, so I had to take them and I learned nothing about singing or chanting.

原句存在多處問題：時態和詞彙錯誤（“are essential”與後句時態需一致；“was faced it”是不正確表達，應用“had to take them”表示被迫參加；“seeing”拼寫錯誤，應為“singing”）。建議：1）使用正確動詞短語“have to/had to take”；2）注意單詞拼寫；3）確保時態一致。

× I learned nothing about seeing or chanting.

✓ I learned nothing about singing or chanting.

“seeing”是錯誤拼寫，應為“singing”。此外，learning about 某事後接動名詞形式是正確的（singing/chanting）。建議注意發音相近單詞的拼寫區分。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

句子語法正確，無需改動。

× I want to sing for my family including my dad who is outstanding lawyer and he can fight for our rights and my tidy mom with extroverted sister.

✓ I want to sing for my family, including my dad, who is an outstanding lawyer and can fight for our rights, my tidy mom, and my extroverted sister.

原句缺少冠詞“an”在“outstanding lawyer”之前，並且標點與結構混亂。需要用逗號分隔並在可數職業前加不定冠詞。建議學習可數名詞前使用冠詞的規則以及使用逗號分隔列舉項目。

× I think it depends their character you know some people like singing and they think umm seeing can relax the self and clear their mind but for me Oh my God that is nightmare for me.

✓ I think it depends on their character. You know, some people like singing and they think singing can relax them and clear their minds, but for me, oh my God, that is a nightmare.

錯誤包括：缺少介詞“on”在“depends on”；“seeing”應為“singing”；“relax the self”不自然，應為“relax them”；“clear their mind”需用複數“minds”與主語一致；“that is nightmare”前需加不定冠詞“a”。建議：1）熟記常用搭配如“depend on”；2）人稱代詞應保持一致；3）注意冠詞使用。

× It depends their saying skills because if they don't understand how to sing I think I can't stand it.

✓ It depends on their singing skills, because if they don't know how to sing, I think I can't stand it.

原句缺少介詞“on”以及使用了“saying skills”錯誤，應為“singing skills”；“understand how to sing”更自然應為“know how to sing”。建議記住固定搭配“depend on”，並注意動詞和名詞的正確形式。

× But however if anything like singer wow, I like to try to visit.

✓ However, if someone is a really good singer, I would like to go and see them perform.

原句結構混亂且用詞不當：“But however”重複；“if anything like singer”語法錯誤且不明確；“try to visit”不符合語境，應表達“去看表演”。建議：1）避免重複連詞；2）用明確主語（someone/a singer）；3）用合適的動詞短語描述行為（go and see/attend a performance）。

× Umm, since I've mentioned before the same class is essential and uh umm you can't replace it. So I have take a scene classes but I learned nothing about it.

✓ Umm, as I mentioned before, the class is essential and you can't replace it. So I have taken some classes, but I learned nothing from them.

錯誤包括：時態和動詞形式錯誤“have take”應為完成式“have taken”；“a scene classes”拼寫和數量錯誤，應為“some classes”；“learned nothing about it”更自然為“learned nothing from them”。建議：1）掌握現在完成時的過去分詞形式；2）注意可數名詞的數量詞使用；3）代詞需與先行詞一致。