Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a clear direct answer, use correct vocabulary, and organize into 2–3 short sentences. State reason(s) briefly and use linking words (because, so) to connect ideas. Avoid repetition and incorrect words (e.g., "selling" → "singing").

예시: No, I don't like singing. I feel shy performing in front of people, so I prefer listening to music because it helps me relax.

제안: Answer directly and concisely. Use a correct verb phrase ("learn to sing" or "take singing lessons"), give a brief reason, and avoid redundancy. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "so".

예시: No, I have never learned to sing or taken lessons. I'm too shy to sing in front of others, so I prefer listening to music instead.

제안: Give a short direct reply (e.g., "I wouldn't sing for anyone") and a clear reason. Avoid rambling; one topic sentence plus one supporting sentence is enough. Use correct pronouns and simple structures.

예시: I wouldn't sing for anyone because I'm too shy to perform in front of people. Instead, I enjoy listening to music at home to relax.

제안: Answer the question generally, then give your personal opinion with a reason. Use linking words (however, but) and avoid repetition. Be specific about how singing helps (e.g., social, emotional).

예시: Yes, singing can make many people happy because it releases emotions and helps people bond. However, I prefer listening to music because it relaxes me.

제안: Start with a clear statement ("It depends") then explain conditions with linking words ("if..., then..."). Use correct relative clauses and pronouns, and give a short specific example.

예시: It depends. If the singer has a pleasant voice and chooses good songs, I enjoy listening to them; but I don't like it when someone sings off-key just to be silly.

제안: Answer directly (No, I haven't) and briefly explain why. Use correct collocations ("singing class/lessons") and avoid repetition. Keep to 1–2 concise sentences with a linking word for reason.

예시: No, I haven't taken any singing lessons because I'm too shy to sing in front of people. I usually listen to music when I come home from work to relax.

× Uh no, I don't like selling because it's there because I am not.

✓ Uh no, I don't like singing because I am not comfortable doing it.

The sentence uses incorrect pronouns and words ('selling', 'there') and an unclear structure. Replace 'selling' with 'singing' and clarify 'I am not comfortable doing it' to express lack of comfort. Use consistent subject pronoun 'I' and a clear adjective 'comfortable'.

× I am feeling gay shy when I am sitting in front of people.

✓ I feel very shy when I sit in front of people.

Use the simple present 'I feel' for habitual feelings and 'sit' instead of 'am sitting'. 'Gay' is incorrect here; use 'very' as an adverb to modify 'shy'. Keep adjective 'shy' after the verb 'feel'.

× Therefore I am understand of listening to the music and when I feeling relaxing, I'm comfortable.

✓ Therefore, I enjoy listening to music, and when I feel relaxed, I'm comfortable.

Incorrect verb forms: 'am understand' and 'when I feeling relaxing'. Use 'enjoy' to express liking, 'listening to music' without 'the', and 'when I feel relaxed' for correct tense and adjective form. Add comma for clarity.

× No, I don't like to learn any of of the class of the about saying because they I am feeling a bit shy in front and pretty shy to to in song on the front of people.

✓ No, I don't like to take singing classes because I feel a bit shy in front of people and too shy to sing in front of them.

Use 'don't like to take' and 'singing classes' as the correct noun phrase. Replace awkward phrases with 'I feel a bit shy in front of people' and 'too shy to sing in front of them'. Correct repetition and word order.

× Therefore, instead of I am listening to the music and it is make me it's make me feel shy, full, comfortable and comfortable.

✓ Instead, I listen to music because it makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.

Remove unnecessary articles ('the music' can be 'music' here). Use simple present 'I listen' for habitual actions and 'it makes me' for cause. Remove redundant words 'it's make me' and contradictory 'shy, full, comfortable' and replace with 'relaxed and comfortable'.

× Actually I don't want to think for anyone because I am feeling shy and when I am sorry I am sending to in front of people.

✓ Actually, I don't want to perform for anyone because I feel shy and sorry when standing in front of people.

'Think for anyone' is incorrect; use 'perform for anyone'. 'Sending to in front of people' is unclear—replace with 'standing in front of people'. Use simple present 'I feel' for habitual feelings and correct word order.

× I am just listening to the music.

✓ I just listen to music.

For habitual action use simple present 'I just listen to music'. 'The music' is unnecessary unless specific music is meant.

× It does make me feel relaxed and comfortable, but I am I am I am very happy.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and comfortable, and it makes me very happy.

Remove redundant 'does' unless for emphasis, and eliminate repeated 'I am'. Use parallel structure: 'it makes me...' twice to be clear.

× Not everyone have have not everyone like it was selling some of the people just depending on the music and the and signing along along the time because it is refilling to the happy.

✓ Not everyone likes singing; some people only enjoy certain music or singing along because it makes them happy.

Subject-verb agreement: 'everyone likes'. Remove repetitions and wrong words ('selling', 'refilling'). Use clear clauses: 'some people only enjoy certain music or singing along because it makes them happy.'

× But I am not interested to the to the signing.

✓ But I am not interested in singing.

Use correct preposition 'interested in' and 'singing' as gerund. Remove extra articles 'the'.

× It is make me very have fun and feeling happy and relaxed.

✓ It makes me have fun and feel happy and relaxed.

Use 'makes' for third-person singular and correct verb forms 'have fun' and 'feel happy and relaxed'. Remove extra 'is' and wrong word order.

× It is dependent when the people or when someone have a sound and he is very strong, very have someone happy.

✓ It depends on the person; if someone has a strong, pleasant voice, I enjoy listening to them.

Use 'depends on' rather than 'is dependent when'. Correct subject-verb agreement 'someone has'. Use adjectives 'strong, pleasant voice' and proper clause structure.

× It is I am very interested to say to listen to them.

✓ I am very interested in listening to them.

Use correct preposition 'interested in' and gerund 'listening'. Remove extra words 'to say to'.

× But when he didn't like the music and just using has sound for the fun, I am don't like it.

✓ But when he doesn't like the music and just uses his voice for fun, I don't like it.

Use present tense for habitual action: 'doesn't' and 'uses'. Correct pronoun 'his' for possession and 'I don't like it' for negative present simple. Remove 'am' before don't.

× Actually, I don't like to take any any glasses of the ceiling because I am not I am very shy to the to the be to be saying to and in front of the people.

✓ Actually, I don't like to take any singing classes because I am very shy about singing in front of people.

Correct 'glasses' to 'classes' and 'ceiling' to 'singing'. Use 'shy about singing' and 'in front of people' for correct preposition and noun usage. Remove repetitions.

× I am interested for the music.

✓ I am interested in music.

Use 'interested in' and remove unnecessary article 'the'. 'Music' is uncountable here.

× I am listening to the music always of the time, especially when I have work and I am written.

✓ I always listen to music, especially when I am working or writing.

Use simple present 'I always listen' for habitual action. 'Have work' -> 'am working'; 'I am written' incorrect, change to 'writing'. Use gerund forms for ongoing activities.

× I am come home to the come back to the home. I am just.

✓ I come home and relax.

Simplify awkward phrase. Use 'I come home and relax' to express returning and then relaxing. Remove incomplete 'I am just.'