Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more concise and correct small grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific example with linking words. Avoid repetition ('singing' repeated) and correct verb agreement.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. For instance, when I feel sad I often play a favorite song and sing along, which lifts my mood and calms me quickly.

제안: Give a direct short answer, correct grammar and expand slightly with a reason or brief detail using a linking word. Replace fillers like 'MMM' with a pause or nothing.

예시: No, I haven't taken formal lessons; instead, I try to imitate singers in recordings to learn phrasing and tone, which helps me improve informally.

제안: Answer the question directly (name a person or say 'no one') and provide a reason with one linking phrase. Fix tense and phrasing (e.g., 'I feel' not 'I will feel'), and avoid informal words like 'cringe'.

예시: I usually sing for no one because I feel shy performing in front of others; as a result, I prefer to sing alone at home where I feel more comfortable.

제안: Correct vocabulary mistakes ('seeing' -> 'singing') and make the idea clearer with better structure and linking words. Use one or two concise supporting points and avoid trailing sentences.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can make people happier because it helps them concentrate on the music rather than their worries, so they can temporarily forget stress and feel more positive.

제안: Make sentences grammatically correct and more coherent. Use linking words ('because', 'for example') properly, and give a clearer specific example with correct word order and tense.

예시: Yes, I enjoy listening to others sing because their enjoyment is contagious; for example, I often go to karaoke with friends and watching them smile while singing makes me happy too.

제안: Combine short sentences into one or two clear sentences, correct articles and use linking words to explain the reason. Avoid sentence fragments beginning with 'Because'.

예시: No, I haven't taken singing classes, but I would try one if I had the chance because I hope it would help me improve my vocal technique.

× Yes, I like singing because singing makes me feel relaxed and help me to release the stress.

✓ Yes, I like singing because singing makes me feel relaxed and helps me to release stress.

Subject-verb agreement: 'singing' as a singular gerund requires the verb 'helps' (third person singular). Also 'the stress' is unnecessary; 'stress' without article is more natural. Suggestion: use 'helps' to match the subject and drop 'the' before 'stress'. ID:10

× For example, when I'm sad, I might listen to the music and sing together.

✓ For example, when I'm sad, I might listen to music and sing along.

Incorrect article and verb choice: 'the music' is unnecessary; 'music' is uncountable and used without 'the' in this general sense. 'Sing together' usually requires another person; 'sing along' is the correct phrase for singing with recorded music. Use 'listen to music' and 'sing along'. ID:22

× MMM no, I just try to mimic how the singer sing in their songs.

✓ No, I just try to mimic how singers sing in their songs.

Number agreement and verb form: 'singer' should be plural 'singers' to match 'their' (plural). 'Sing' is fine in present when describing general habit. Alternatively, to express past attempt use 'tried to mimic how singers sang'. Keep tense consistent with general habit: 'try to mimic how singers sing'. ID:5

× Well I would say no because I feel shy when I'm singing in front of someone.

✓ Well, I would say no because I feel shy when I sing in front of someone.

Pronoun/verb form: 'I'm singing' is grammatically acceptable but switching to simple present 'I sing' is more natural for habitual or general statements. Add comma after 'Well'. ID:12

× I will feel awkward and cringe at that moment.

✓ I will feel awkward and cringe at that moment.

Although the sentence is understandable, 'cringe' as verb with 'I' usually needs 'feel' or 'be' (e.g., 'cringe' is often intransitive but 'I will cringe' is acceptable). Better: 'I will feel awkward and cringe' is grammatically possible; however more natural: 'I will feel awkward and embarrassed' or 'I will cringe.' Keep one: 'I will feel awkward and cringe at that moment.' Explanation: choose consistent verbs; no reflexive pronoun needed. (No correction necessary) ID:15

× So I don't think to anyone.

✓ So I wouldn't sing for anyone.

Incorrect verb and structure: 'think to anyone' is ungrammatical. The intended meaning is refusing to sing for others. Use conditional/modal 'wouldn't sing for anyone' to match 'I would say no' earlier. This corrects sentence structure and clarifies meaning. ID:26

× Yes, I think seeing can bring happiness to people because when people sing they will just focus on the singing part but not the others thing.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when people sing they focus on the singing part and not on other things.

Multiple errors: 'seeing' is wrong choice; should be 'singing'. Use simple present 'focus' for general truth rather than 'will just focus'. 'others thing' is incorrect—use 'other things' and include 'on' after 'not'. Also remove extra 'the'. ID:8

× So there will just temporarily forget the other things that worry about and then.

✓ So they will temporarily forget the things that worry them.

Structure and pronoun errors: 'there will just temporarily forget' is ungrammatical. Use 'they will temporarily forget' and place adverb 'temporarily' before verb. 'the other things that worry about' lacks object for 'worry'; use 'things that worry them'. Remove trailing 'and then'. ID:26

× Yes I like listening to other singing.

✓ Yes, I like listening to others sing.

Incorrect form: 'other singing' is wrong. Use 'others' (people) + base verb 'sing' to mean listening to other people sing. Add comma after 'Yes'. ID:12

× I enjoy when they singing because I can see the smile on their face when they singing.

✓ I enjoy it when they sing because I can see the smile on their faces when they sing.

Verb form: use base verb 'sing' after 'they' for habitual action. 'Enjoy it when...' is natural. 'The smile on their face' should be plural 'faces' when referring to multiple people. Repeat 'when they sing' or simplify. ID:8

× For example I go down with my friend and sing in the karaoke I usually.

✓ For example, I usually go to karaoke with my friend and sing.

Word order and collocations: 'go down with my friend' is unnatural; use 'go to karaoke with my friend'. Place adverb 'usually' before the verb for natural word order. Add commas as needed. ID:26

× No, I have not taken the singing class, but if there's a chance I would try it.

✓ No, I have not taken a singing class, but if there's a chance I would try it.

Article use: 'the singing class' implies a specific class; for general statement use 'a singing class'. Keep present perfect 'have not taken' for experience and conditional 'would try' for hypothetical. ID:22

× Because I hope I can improve my singing skill after.

✓ Because I hope I can improve my singing skills in the future.

Preposition and noun form: 'after' is vague; use 'in the future'. 'Singing skill' should be plural 'singing skills' or 'my singing ability'. This clarifies meaning and uses correct collocation. ID:11