Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu tính tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp thì quá khứ/hiện tại. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng thì phù hợp, tránh lặp ý và thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn. Ví dụ: nêu rõ hiện tại có còn thích hay không, lí do cụ thể (ví dụ: giúp tự tin, thể hiện cảm xúc) và liên hệ với mơ ước thời thơ ấu một cách ngắn gọn.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy singing. I started when I was a child and it helped me build confidence. It also connected to my childhood dream of becoming a singer, so singing still feels meaningful to me.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng ngắt quãng, lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Nên dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: thừa nhận chưa học chuyên nghiệp, mô tả cách tự học online với từ vựng chính xác, và giới thiệu ví dụ cụ thể (kênh hoặc loại bài học). Tránh tiếng tạp âm như 'uh' và dùng thì phù hợp.

예시: I haven't taken professional singing lessons, but I often learn from online videos on TikTok and YouTube. Many creators post short tutorials on breathing and pitch, which I follow to improve my technique.

제안: Ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng dùng tiếng thân mật quá mức ('wanna') và lặp ý. Nên bắt đầu với câu chủ đề trực tiếp, dùng từ ngữ trang trọng hơn, và cung cấp một hoặc hai lí do cụ thể, kèm liên kết logic giữa các ý.

예시: I usually sing for myself because it's my hobby and it helps me relax. Singing lets me immerse myself in the lyrics and rhythms, and it reduces stress after a busy day.

제안: Câu trả lời khó hiểu do lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng chọn không phù hợp và ý không mạch lạc. Cần một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích ngắn gọn tại sao hát mang lại niềm vui với ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: tụ họp, chữa lành cảm xúc), và sửa các lỗi như 'brings joyful'→'bring joy', 'they stressful'→'they feel less stressed'.

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings joy to people. A well-sung song or a catchy tune can lift people's mood, bring friends together, and help listeners feel less stressed.

제안: Câu trả lời có nội dung nhưng nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thông tin không chính xác (Rosé is a member, Blackpink is the group). Nên nói rõ mình thích nghe trên nền tảng nào, nêu nghệ sĩ chính xác và giải thích ngắn gọn vì sao (ví dụ: cảm xúc, kỹ thuật). Tránh lỗi như 'which sing by other people' và 'with deeply'.

예시: Yes, I enjoy listening to singers on YouTube and Spotify. I'm a fan of Rosé from Blackpink because her voice is emotional and expressive, and I like how she conveys feeling in ballads.

제안: Ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và câu dài lủng củng. Nên trả lời trực tiếp (có/không), giải thích ngắn gọn lý do và thêm chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào, loại lớp). Tránh tiếng lắp và dùng thì đúng (e.g., 'I have never been to a professional singing class').

예시: No, I have never taken professional singing lessons, but I did take dance classes when I was in nursery and in third grade, which helped my stage confidence.

× I really enjoy singing when I was a child because I think it's can help me develop my confidence and also a little bit related to my childhood dream.

✓ I really enjoyed singing when I was a child because I think it can help me develop my confidence and it is also a little related to my childhood dream.

Sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'I really enjoy singing when I was a child' should use past tense 'enjoyed' because 'when I was a child' refers to the past. Remove the extra auxiliary 'it's' before 'can' and use 'it is also a little related' or 'it is also slightly related' for clarity. Suggestion: keep tense consistent by using past for past time expressions and avoid redundant auxiliaries. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I never learned how to sing in a professional way, but when I'm surfing Tiktok or social media platform, I usually catch the many videos, uh, recorded by a single teach people how to sing.

✓ I never learned how to sing in a professional way, but when I surf TikTok or other social media platforms, I usually watch many videos recorded by a single singer who teaches people how to sing.

Mixed tenses and wrong word choices: 'I'm surfing' (present continuous) is mismatched with habitual 'usually'; use simple present 'I surf'. 'Catch the many videos' is incorrect collocation; use 'watch many videos'. 'Recorded by a single teach people' is grammatically wrong: 'singer who teaches people'. Also pluralize 'platform' to 'platforms' and correct 'TikTok' capitalization. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and correct noun/verb forms. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I think I wanna sing for myself, for my hobby, for my childhood dream, for everything I like.

✓ I think I want to sing for myself, for my hobby, for my childhood dream, and for everything I like.

'wanna' is informal spoken contraction; in a test answer use 'want to'. Also add 'and' before the final item for correct listing. This is primarily style and conjunction use; keep formal infinitive 'want to'. Suggestion: replace colloquial contractions with full forms and use proper connectors. Grammar problem type ID: 16

× When I sing, I wanna immerse myself in the lyrics or the rhythms.

✓ When I sing, I want to immerse myself in the lyrics and the rhythm.

Again 'wanna' is informal; replace with 'want to'. 'Rhythms' is acceptable but 'the rhythm' is more natural here; use 'and' instead of 'or' because both lyrics and rhythm contribute to immersion. Suggestion: use full infinitive 'want to' and choose conjunctions that reflect intended meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I also wanna reduce stress.

✓ I also want to reduce stress.

Replace colloquial 'wanna' with the formal 'want to' to suit test context. Tense is present and correct, only formality needs fixing. Suggestion: avoid informal contractions in formal speech. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I really think that singing can brings joyful to people around you.

✓ I really think that singing can bring joy to the people around you.

Modal 'can' must be followed by the base verb 'bring', not 'brings'. 'Joyful' is an adjective; use the noun 'joy' to express 'bring joy'. Add 'the' before 'people around you' for specificity. Suggestion: after modal verbs use base form; choose correct noun/adjective forms. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× When you play a song or when you start to singing, you can realize that if you have a good voice or if the music's that music is really good, people can enjoy it and really they stressful.

✓ When you play a song or when you start to sing, you can realize that if you have a good voice or if the music is really good, people can enjoy it and feel less stressed.

'Start to singing' is wrong; after 'start' use 'to' + base verb ('start to sing') or gerund ('start singing'). Remove the redundant phrase 'the music's that music'. 'People can enjoy it and really they stressful' is ungrammatical; use 'feel less stressed' or 'relax'. Suggestion: choose correct verb patterns after 'start' and use clear verbs for emotions/states ('feel stressed'). Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I really enjoy listening to music which sing by other people on YouTube, Spotify or Apple Music.

✓ I really enjoy listening to music that is sung by other people on YouTube, Spotify, or Apple Music.

Use the relative clause 'that is sung by' (passive voice) instead of 'which sing by'. Also add commas in a list and use 'that' for defining relative clauses. Suggestion: use passive construction 'is sung by' when the doer follows the verb and correct relative pronoun choice. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I am a fan of Rose from Blackpink's.

✓ I am a fan of Rosé from Blackpink.

Possessive 'Blackpink's' is incorrect here. Use 'Rosé' (correct spelling) and 'from Blackpink' to indicate membership. Do not add a possessive marker. Suggestion: use correct names and avoid unnecessary possessive forms. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I really enjoy how they sing that song with deeply.

✓ I really enjoy how they sing that song so deeply.

'With deeply' is incorrect; use the adverb 'deeply' and place it after the verb or use 'so deeply' to add emphasis. Also ensure pronoun 'they' correctly refers to the group. Suggestion: position adverbs appropriately and use intensifiers correctly. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Through my whole childhood I never been to a singing class in a professional way which uh teach by a singer or a teacher.

✓ Throughout my childhood I never went to a professional singing class taught by a singer or teacher.

Use 'went' (past tense) instead of 'been' with the time expression 'throughout my childhood'. 'Which uh teach by' is wrong: use 'taught by'. Also use 'professional singing class' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use correct past tense verbs for past periods and proper passive 'taught by'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× But I have learned how to dance when I in nursery and in grade 3.

✓ But I learned how to dance when I was in nursery and in grade 3.

Use simple past 'learned' rather than present perfect 'have learned' because the time is specified. Also include 'was' after 'I' for 'I was in nursery'. Suggestion: use simple past for actions tied to specific past times and include appropriate auxiliary verbs for past states.