Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为简单。建议注意语法正确性，如将“healthy”改为“health”，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax both mentally and physically.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，并且避免模糊的词汇，如“gifty”。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing in high school, but I eventually gave up because I found it too difficult to master.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用正确的句子结构和词汇，如“two children”代替“to children's”，并且表达更清晰。

예시: I would like to sing for my children. I have two boys, and sometimes I sing children's songs for them.

제안: 回答中多次使用了错误的词汇“healthy”，应改为“health”，并且表达可以更流畅自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子。

예시: Yes, definitely. Singing is good for our health, especially mental and physical health, because soothing songs can help people relax.

× Just help me to relax my mental and physical healthy.

✓ It just helps me to relax my mental and physical health.

这里需要使用动词的第三人称单数形式，因为主语是单数的"It"。另外，"healthy"是形容词，应该用名词"health"来表示健康状态。

× Yes definitely I have learned how to sing but it is my high school.

✓ Yes, definitely I have learned how to sing, but it was in my high school.

这里描述过去的时间点，应该使用过去时态"was"，而不是现在时态"is"。

× But finally I gave up to singing because I think it is too difficult for me to learn to think.

✓ But finally I gave up singing because I think it is too difficult for me to learn to sing.

"give up"后面直接接动名词形式，不能加介词"to"。另外，句中"learn to think"应为"learn to sing"，符合语境。

× Oh well, I'd like to sing for my children, but you know, I have got to children's both boys.

✓ Oh well, I'd like to sing for my children, but you know, I have got two children, both boys.

"to children's"是错误的表达，应该是"two children"表示数量。

× Sometimes I will see some kids songs for them.

✓ Sometimes I will sing some kids' songs for them.

"see"用错了，应该是"sing"表示唱歌。"kids songs"应加所有格，变成"kids' songs"。

× Yeah, of course. I think singing is beneficial for our healthy, especially for the mental healthy and the physical healthy because the smoothie songs can make people relax.

✓ Yeah, of course. I think singing is beneficial for our health, especially for mental and physical health because soothing songs can help people relax.

"healthy"是形容词，应该用名词"health"。"the mental healthy"和"the physical healthy"中的冠词不需要。"smoothie songs"应为"soothing songs"，意为舒缓的歌曲。