Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且有重复，建议避免重复表达，简洁明了地说明喜欢唱歌的原因。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and reduces my stress after a long day.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题并补充具体理由。

예시: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I find singing interesting and it adds joy to my daily life.

제안: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊，建议明确说明想为谁唱歌及原因，使用连词使句子更连贯。

예시: I want to sing for my family and friends during celebrations because it brings us closer and spreads happiness.

제안: 回答重复且表达不流畅，建议用更具体的例子和连贯的句子表达观点。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and share joyful moments together.

× No, I seldom learn how to think, but I think learn singing is a very interesting and the meaningful thing for me to enrich my daily life.

✓ No, I seldom learn how to sing, but I think learning singing is a very interesting and meaningful thing for me to enrich my daily life.

这里的错误是动词时态和形式使用不当。原句中使用了“learn how to think”，应为“learn how to sing”，因为上下文是关于唱歌的。其次，“think learn singing”应改为“think learning singing”，因为动词think后接动名词形式更合适。建议将“learn”改为“learning”。

× No, I seldom learn how to think, but I think learn singing is a very interesting and the meaningful thing for me to enrich my daily life.

✓ No, I seldom learn how to sing, but I think learning singing is a very interesting and meaningful thing for me to enrich my daily life.

动词think后面接动名词形式更自然，故将“learn”改为“learning”。

× I want to sing some songs for celebrating to others or to think some hopeful songs.

✓ I want to sing some songs to celebrate with others or to sing some hopeful songs.

“for celebrating to others”用法不正确，应该用不定式“to celebrate”并且搭配介词“with others”表示与他人一起。

× I want to sing some songs for celebrating to others or to think some hopeful songs.

✓ I want to sing some songs to celebrate with others or to sing some hopeful songs.

“to think some hopeful songs”表达不准确，应为“to sing some hopeful songs”，因为“think”不适合描述唱歌行为。

× Yes, I think things can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people.

“things”指代不明确，结合上下文应为“singing”，更符合语境。

× It is a good way to provide some happiness with others and it is very obviously to share some happiness to others.

✓ It is a good way to share happiness with others and it is very obvious to share happiness with others.

“very obviously”应改为形容词“very obvious”，且“provide some happiness with others”表达不自然，改为“share happiness with others”更合适。