Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，避免重复和语法错误，表达清晰的观点。

예시: Yes, I like singing sometimes because it helps me relax. Although I am not very good at it, I enjoy singing for fun.

제안: 回答不连贯，语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子直接回答问题，并解释原因，避免语法错误。

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't consider it very important, so I haven't spent much time practicing.

제안: 表达混乱，语法错误多，句子不完整。建议用完整句子表达想法，注意主谓一致和代词使用，清晰表达感情。

예시: I want to sing for my parents because they are very kind to me. Sometimes I sing songs to help them relax and to show my love for them.

제안: 回答内容较好，但语法和表达仍需改进。建议使用连贯句子，避免断句，表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. When I feel busy or angry, singing or listening to music helps me relax and calm down.

× Sometimes I like singing. Because I came singing can relax myself.

✓ Sometimes I like singing because singing can relax me.

句子不应以连词Because单独成句，应与前句合并。且“came singing”用词错误，应为“singing”。“relax myself”应改为“relax me”，因为“relax”是及物动词，宾语不能用反身代词。

× But I think my singing is not bad.

✓ But I think my singing is not bad.

此句语法无明显错误，保持原句。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

“learnt”是英式英语过去分词，若使用美式英语应用“learned”。根据上下文，保持时态正确。

× Perhaps not, because I think singing for me is not very important. So I don't. Spare many time in how to think.

✓ Perhaps not, because I think singing is not very important to me. So I don't spend much time thinking about it.

“So I don't.”句子不完整，应与后句合并。短语“Spare many time in how to think”表达不当，应改为“spend much time thinking about it”。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× My parents. Can I want to sing to them?

✓ My parents. I want to sing to them.

“Can I want”结构错误，情态动词“can”不能与“want”连用，应直接表达“I want to sing to them.”。

× Because my parents is very good for me.

✓ Because my parents are very good to me.

“parents”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。“good for me”应改为“good to me”，表达更自然。

× Sometimes I can sing some song to them, can help them to relax themselves and tell them I'm so love her.

✓ Sometimes I can sing some songs to them, which can help them relax and tell them I love them very much.

“some song”应为复数“some songs”。“can help them to relax themselves”中“themselves”多余，改为“help them relax”。“I'm so love her”表达错误，应为“I love them very much”。

× I so.

✓ I do.

“I so”不符合英语表达习惯，应改为“I do”表示肯定。

× Singing is a very good for our. Physical.

✓ Singing is very good for our health.

“a very good”后缺少名词，且“Physical”用法错误，应改为“health”表示健康。

× When I feel busy and feel angry, I can sing or listen some music.

✓ When I feel busy and angry, I can sing or listen to some music.

“listen some music”应为“listen to some music”。

× It is very helpful to me to relax myself and calm down.

✓ It is very helpful for me to relax and calm down.

“helpful to me to relax myself”中“myself”多余，改为“helpful for me to relax”。