Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer clearer and more coherent by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and focus on expressing your ideas naturally and effectively within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and makes me feel happy. For example, singing my favorite songs instantly lifts my mood and improves my mental well-being.

제안: Focus on answering the question directly with clear and grammatically correct sentences. Use linking words to explain your habits and feelings. Avoid unclear phrases and try to be specific about your experience with singing.

예시: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. However, when I feel sad, I like to listen to my favourite Punjabi songs and try to sing along by repeating the lyrics. This practice makes me feel more comfortable and relaxed.

제안: Make your answer more structured and clear by using correct grammar and vocabulary. Directly answer the question and use linking words to explain your reasons. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases to improve coherence.

예시: I want to sing for my friends and family because it makes me feel comfortable and relieves my stress. Singing in front of them is easier since they support me, which helps me improve my singing skills.

제안: Answer the question clearly with correct grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your opinion and provide specific reasons. Avoid unclear or incomplete sentences to make your answer more effective.

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to everyone. It helps decrease stress and makes people feel more relaxed and joyful.

× Yes, I really enjoy singing because when I sing for myself for it relieves my's address and aware and I'm I feel very happy when I sing and I feel very likes to which is more very important for my mental well braying.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy singing because when I sing for myself, it relieves my stress and I feel very happy. I like it very much, which is very important for my mental well-being.

The sentence contains incorrect pronoun usage such as 'my's address and aware' which is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'my stress' to express relief. Also, 'I feel very likes to which is more very important' is grammatically incorrect and unclear; it should be 'I like it very much, which is very important'. Clear and correct pronouns improve sentence clarity.

× No, I did not learn how to sing, but when I was sad I haven't hobby offer to sing a song.

✓ No, I did not learn how to sing, but when I was sad, I had a hobby of singing a song.

The phrase 'haven't hobby offer to sing a song' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'of' after 'hobby' and the verb form should be 'had' to indicate past tense. Proper preposition use is essential for correct meaning.

× I used to listen a song of my favorite singer.

✓ I used to listen to a song of my favorite singer.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Omitting 'to' is a common error but changes the grammatical correctness of the sentence.

× I like to singa Punjabi songs but I I used to listen to songs and repeat the repeat that sound lyrics and improve my personalization.

✓ I like to sing Punjabi songs, and I used to listen to songs and repeat the lyrics to improve my pronunciation.

The sentence has plural and singular form issues such as 'repeat the repeat that sound lyrics' which is incorrect. Also, 'personalization' is likely a wrong word here; 'pronunciation' fits the context. Correct singular/plural forms and word choice improve clarity.

× This failed me more comfort.

✓ This made me feel more comfortable.

The phrase 'failed me more comfort' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'made me feel more comfortable'. Proper verb and adjective use with correct prepositions is necessary.

× I want to sing for my friends and my family members because it fills me more comfort table and relieves my surprise.

✓ I want to sing for my friends and my family members because it makes me feel more comfortable and relieves my stress.

The phrase 'fills me more comfort table and relieves my surprise' is incorrect. 'Comfort table' is not a correct phrase; it should be 'feel more comfortable'. 'Relieves my surprise' is incorrect; likely intended 'relieves my stress'. Correct pronoun and word usage is important.

× This year is single in front of my family members and my and my friends because they support me to dial to scale.

✓ This year I sing in front of my family members and my friends because they support me to develop my skills.

The sentence contains multiple errors including 'single' instead of 'sing', and 'dial to scale' which is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'develop my skills'. Proper verb forms and prepositions are necessary for clarity.

× This is single web properly and it fails me more comfort able to sing in front of my friends and my family member.

✓ I sing well now and it makes me more comfortable to sing in front of my friends and my family members.

The phrase 'single web properly' is incorrect; it should be 'sing well properly' or simply 'sing well'. 'Fails me more comfort able' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me more comfortable'. Correct verb forms and prepositions are essential.

× Yeah, sing according to me says singing brings happiness to every individual.

✓ Yeah, according to me, singing brings happiness to every individual.

The phrase 'sing according to me says' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'according to me, singing brings...'. Proper placement of prepositional phrases is important for sentence clarity.

× It decrease the stress of every person vendor then every person who singing.

✓ It decreases the stress of every person who sings.

The sentence has errors in verb form and unnecessary words like 'vendor then every person who singing'. The correct verb is 'decreases' for third person singular, and 'who sings' is the correct relative clause. Removing unnecessary words and correct verb forms improve clarity.