Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且存在语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达自己的喜好，并使用正确的时态和词汇。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I'm not good at it. However, I enjoy listening to people who have beautiful voices.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议使用正确的时态和连接词，清晰表达观点。

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing. I believe singing is a natural talent, and if you have a passion for it, you don't necessarily need formal lessons.

제안: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地说明对象和原因，并使用连贯的句子。

예시: I want to sing a song for my mother because she always takes good care of me. Singing for her would be a way to show my love and appreciation.

제안: 回答表达不够清晰，存在重复和语法错误。建议用简洁的句子表达观点，并举例说明。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because melodies are beautiful and can evoke strong emotions, which can improve people's mood.

× I don't like seen before because I don't got good at it.

✓ I don't like singing because I'm not good at it.

这里错误地使用了过去分词'seen'，正确表达应该用动名词'singing'表示喜欢做某事。同时，'I don't got'是错误的，应该用'I am not good at it'。

× But I like to listening to understanding his specially who have the beautiful Wales.

✓ But I like listening to and understanding those who have beautiful voices.

动词后面接动名词时，应该用'like listening'而不是'to listening'。此外，句子结构混乱，'understanding his specially who have the beautiful Wales'不通顺，改为'understanding those who have beautiful voices'更合适。

× No, I never learn how to sing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing.

表示过去经历时，应该用现在完成时'have learned'，而不是一般过去时'learn'。

× I think it is a natural and if you have appetite for it, you don't need to listen.

✓ I think it is natural, and if you have an appetite for it, you don't need to learn.

'a natural'用法错误，应该是'natural'。另外，'appetite'前需要冠词'an'，'listen'用法不当，应该是'learn'。

× Oh I I will change.

✓ Oh, I will change.

句子中重复了'I'，应删除多余的词。

× she always posed Myung take care of me and seeing for her.

✓ she always takes care of me, and I want to do the same for her.

'posed Myung'无意义，应该是'she always takes care of me'。'seeing for her'错误，改为'I want to do the same for her'更通顺。

× Maybe a way to show my love.

✓ Maybe it's a way to show my love.

句子缺少主语和谓语，应该加上'it's'使句子完整。

× because melody is a beautiful thing and can give you a great, great emotion and give you powerful give you power than your disposition.

✓ because melody is a beautiful thing and can give you great emotions and more power than your disposition.

'emotion'应为复数形式'emotions'，'give you powerful give you power'重复且结构错误，改为'give you more power'。