Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有多处语法错误和词汇使用错误，导致表达不清晰。建议加强基础语法和词汇的学习，避免重复和无意义的词汇。回答时应直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子表达原因。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it is an interesting activity in my daily life. My favorite music is classical, and I believe singing helps me improve my musical skills.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不连贯，表达不清楚。建议练习简单句的构造，使用连接词使句子更流畅。回答时应直接说明学习唱歌的经历，并提供具体细节。

예시: Yes, I learned to sing when I was in primary school. My music teacher taught me basic singing skills, and I continued practicing in secondary school.

제안: 回答表达了基本意思，但语法和词汇使用不准确，句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，增加连接词使表达更自然。

예시: I want to sing for my mother because she also likes music. She enjoys playing the piano, and I think singing to her would make her very happy.

제안: 回答中多次出现词汇错误和语法错误，影响表达效果。建议学习常用词汇和句型，避免重复，使用连接词使句子连贯。回答时应具体说明唱歌带来的好处。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music always makes people feel joyful. Singing can help people relax and feel more comfortable.

× Yes, I like seeing becauses I seeing.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I am singing.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，且动词后应使用动名词形式表示喜欢的动作。'I seeing'应改为'I am singing'，表示现在进行时。

× I think seeing is uh, interesting things in a normal day.

✓ I think singing is an interesting thing in a normal day.

'interesting things'应为单数形式'an interesting thing'，因为这里指的是唱歌这件事。

× The classical music is my favorite hobby so I can I think thinning can improve my music ability.

✓ Classical music is my favorite hobby, so I think singing can improve my musical ability.

'The classical music'中冠词'the'不必要，应去掉。'thinning'应为'singing'。'music ability'应改为'musical ability'，形容词修饰名词。

× Uh, I learn to sing as my priming school.

✓ Uh, I learned to sing in primary school.

描述过去经历时，动词应使用过去式'learned'。'priming school'应为'primary school'。

× My music teacher teach me how to sing, but when I went to LA secondary school.

✓ My music teacher taught me how to sing, but when I went to LA secondary school,

过去时态中，'teach'应改为'taught'。

× I have basic day in learning so I knows have many times children how to think so is. Is.

✓ I had basic days learning, so I know many children and how they think.

原句结构混乱，需调整为正确的句子结构，使用过去时'had'和'know'。

× I want sing to my mother because my mother also like.

✓ I want to sing to my mother because my mother also likes music.

'want sing'应为'want to sing'，动词不定式。'my mother also like'应为'my mother also likes'，主谓一致。

× Music she like playing the piano and if I sing to her and she may be felt very. Very happy.

✓ She likes playing the piano, and if I sing to her, she may feel very happy.

第三人称单数动词应加's'，'like'改为'likes'。'may be felt'应为'may feel'，情态动词后接动词原形。

× Yes, of course, I think seeing can bring the people hapiness 'cause the music always bring the people happiness.

✓ Yes, of course, I think singing can bring people happiness because music always brings people happiness.

'seeing'应为'singing'。'bring'应根据主语变为'brings'。'the people'中'the'不必要，应去掉。

× So I think so. I think seeing has the same function.

✓ So I think so. I think singing has the same function.

'seeing'应为'singing'，保持前文一致。

× It can make people too. Felder, relax and expand.

✓ It can make people feel relaxed and happy.

'Felder'应为'feel', 'relax'应为'relaxed'，'expand'用法不当，改为'happy'更合适。