Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is quite natural and shows your feelings about singing, but it is a bit unclear and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. When I sing, I feel comfortable and it allows me to release my feelings through the songs I choose.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by structuring it better and using linking words. Also, try to avoid repeating the idea of 'rarely getting time' twice. Be more specific about your schedule and how it affects your learning.

예시: No, I have never learnt how to sing formally because, as a student, I rarely get free time due to my busy schedule. Therefore, I haven't had the opportunity to take singing lessons.

제안: Your answer is heartfelt and relevant, but it can be improved by making the sentences clearer and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about why you want to sing for your parents.

예시: I would love to sing for my parents because they have always shown me love and trust. Moreover, they have worked hard to support me, so singing for them would be my way of expressing gratitude.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammatical mistakes. Try to organise your thoughts clearly, use linking words, and avoid redundancy. Also, check your pronunciation of words like 'singing'.

예시: Yes, I firmly believe that singing can bring happiness because it allows people to release their suppressed emotions. Additionally, it helps them relieve stress from their busy lives and enjoy the present moment.

× I love singing 'cause it helps me to get into my comfort zone and helps me to just let off my feelings are in any song I sent.

✓ I love singing 'cause it helps me to get into my comfort zone and helps me to just let off my feelings in any song I sing.

The phrase 'my feelings are in any song I sent' is incorrect. The verb 'sent' is past tense and does not fit the context. The correct verb should be 'sing' in the present tense to match the ongoing action. Also, 'are' is unnecessary here and should be removed to maintain sentence clarity.

× No, I have not learned how to sing 'cause once in the blue moon I get time for myself being a student.

✓ No, I have not learned how to sing 'cause once in a blue moon I get time for myself being a student.

The phrase 'once in the blue moon' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'once in a blue moon'. This is a fixed expression meaning very rarely, so the article 'a' should be used instead of 'the'.

× Well, I firmly believe that sinking can bring happiness to the people as though it will help them to let go their feelings which they are suppressing in in their own mind and would also help them to just get relief from the stress on the hectic schedule their following and were the more overhead them to just enjoy the moment.

✓ Well, I firmly believe that singing can bring happiness to people as it helps them to let go of their feelings which they are suppressing in their own minds and also helps them to get relief from the stress of the hectic schedule they are following and allows them to just enjoy the moment.

Several preposition errors are present: 'let go their feelings' should be 'let go of their feelings'; 'suppressing in in their own mind' should be 'suppressing in their own minds'; 'relief from the stress on the hectic schedule their following' should be 'relief from the stress of the hectic schedule they are following'; 'were the more overhead them' is unclear and corrected to 'allows them'. Correct preposition usage is essential for clarity and grammatical correctness.