Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议练习用简单句子表达观点，避免重复和语法错误，增强表达的清晰度和逻辑性。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and release stress. When I sing, I feel happy and joyful.

제안: 回答内容混乱，语法错误多，表达不清晰。建议练习用完整句子回答问题，避免无关内容，保持回答的相关性和连贯性。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I usually sing for fun when I listen to music.

제안: 回答表达不清楚，句子结构混乱。建议用简洁明了的句子表达观点，并提供具体理由，使回答更有条理。

예시: I want to sing for myself because it helps me relax and encourages me after a hard day.

제안: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，表达不流畅。建议练习使用正确的词汇和句型，清晰表达观点，并用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, definitely. Singing is an activity that allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress, which can bring happiness.

× I think I am a person who quite.

✓ I think I am a person who quite likes singing.

这里缺少动词，且主语是单数，动词需要用第三人称单数形式。原句中“quite”用法不当，应改为“quite likes singing”表示“非常喜欢唱歌”。

× Like I quite like love thing 'cause I because I think I see is the way for me to release pressure and I can gains hapiness Ann. Joyful during, at thing and.

✓ I quite like singing because I think it is a way for me to release pressure and I can gain happiness and joy during it.

原句中“love thing”表达不清，且“gains”动词形式错误，应为“gain”。“Ann. Joyful during, at thing and.”语序混乱，需调整为“happiness and joy during it”。

× Wow, I never learned how to sing Kiss.

✓ Wow, I have never learned how to sing properly.

“never learned”应使用现在完成时“have never learned”表示到目前为止未学过。且“sing Kiss”表达不清，改为“sing properly”更合适。

× I'm just. Sing weather whenever I want and I.

✓ I just sing whenever I want.

“Sing weather”是错误搭配，应去掉“weather”。

× Just listen to the music and I. No. How to pronounce the Korean?

✓ I just listen to music and I don't know how to pronounce Korean songs.

原句中“Just listen to the music and I. No.”语法不完整，缺少主语和谓语，且“No”应为否定形式“don't know”。

× I want to sing for myself 'cause because I think that. I am a person aside. Live for myself and I have paid a lot of effort on my day so I should think for myself to encourage myself an. 2.

✓ I want to sing for myself because I think I am a person who lives for myself and I have put a lot of effort into my day, so I should think of myself to encourage myself.

原句中“aside. Live for myself”语法错误，应为“who lives for myself”。“paid a lot of effort on my day”应改为“put a lot of effort into my day”。

× Yes, definitely 'cause because seeing is a activities that can which allow people to scream or.

✓ Yes, definitely because singing is an activity that allows people to scream or sing out loud.

“seeing”应为“singing”，“a activities”应为“an activity”，“can which allow”语序错误，应为“that allows”。

× Sing out loud which can help them too. Uhm. Transfers dress too.

✓ Sing out loud which can help them too, to relieve stress.

“Transfers dress”是错误表达，应为“relieve stress”表示“缓解压力”。