Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains several language errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct vocabulary ('singing' instead of 'saying'), improve sentence structure, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress from my studies. My favourite song is 'Through the Rain' as it inspires me with its message of perseverance and resilience, which motivates me during difficult times.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear phrases and minor grammar mistakes. Avoid filler words like 'uhm' and ensure clarity by choosing correct words ('singing' instead of 'saying'). Use linking words to connect ideas and keep your answer concise.

예시: I haven't had formal singing training, but I was a member of the school choir for over ten years, from primary to secondary school. This experience helped me gain basic singing skills.

제안: Your answer has good content but is affected by grammar errors and unclear expressions. Make sure to use correct possessive forms ('Mariah Carey's'), and clarify your points. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I would love to sing for Mariah Carey, my favourite singer. She is an iconic American artist, and her song 'Through the Rain' has always motivated me during tough times. Singing for her would be my way of expressing gratitude.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid irrelevant or confusing words. Use linking words to structure your answer logically and keep it concise.

예시: Yes, I believe singing is very powerful and can bring happiness to many people. For example, Mariah Carey's song 'Through the Rain' talks about resilience and has inspired many during difficult times.

× An my favorite song will be Through the rain because the film is about perseverance and resilience.

✓ And my favorite song is 'Through the Rain' because the film is about perseverance and resilience.

The sentence starts with 'An' which is incorrect; it should be 'And' to connect the ideas properly. Also, 'will be' is not appropriate here; the present simple 'is' is better to state a fact. Additionally, the song title should be capitalised and enclosed in quotes for clarity.

× It definitely recharge me about downtimes.

✓ It definitely recharges me during downtimes.

The verb 'recharge' needs to agree with the singular subject 'It', so it should be 'recharges'. Also, the preposition 'about' is incorrect here; 'during' is more appropriate to indicate the time when the recharging happens.

× I didn't go through a very rigorous training and saying, but I did participate in the choir for more than 10 years from primary to secondary school.

✓ I didn't go through very rigorous training and singing, but I did participate in the choir for more than 10 years from primary to secondary school.

The word 'saying' is incorrect; it should be 'singing' to refer to the activity. Also, 'a very rigorous training' is incorrect because 'training' is uncountable here, so 'very rigorous training' is correct.

× So I didn't follow afraid traditional training, but I did acquire some basic knowledge about singing.

✓ So I didn't follow any traditional training, but I did acquire some basic knowledge about singing.

The phrase 'follow afraid traditional training' is incorrect. It should be 'follow any traditional training' to express the absence of formal training. 'Afraid' is not appropriate here.

× I would like to sing in front of Mariah Careys who is my favorite singer.

✓ I would like to sing in front of Mariah Carey, who is my favorite singer.

The name 'Mariah Careys' is incorrect; it should be 'Mariah Carey'. Also, a comma is needed before 'who' to introduce the relative clause.

× She is a very iconic American singer and her son like through terrain always motivate me during difficult times.

✓ She is a very iconic American singer and her song 'Through the Rain' always motivates me during difficult times.

The word 'son' should be 'song'. The song title should be capitalised and in quotes. The verb 'motivate' needs to be in third person singular form 'motivates' to agree with the singular subject 'song'. 'Like' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× So I relate to say thank you to her by singing a song.

✓ So I want to say thank you to her by singing a song.

The phrase 'I relate to say' is incorrect. It should be 'I want to say' to express the intention clearly.

× Yeah, I do agree that music or singing is super powerful and delivering happiness to many people because Frank sticking Mariah Carey's song as an example like through their rang dishonest talking about resilience and perseverance, Anna Bad that this song has motivated countless people during that difficult times.

✓ Yeah, I do agree that music or singing is super powerful and delivers happiness to many people. For instance, Mariah Carey's song 'Through the Rain' talks about resilience and perseverance, and this song has motivated countless people during difficult times.

The original sentence is confusing and contains many errors. 'Delivering' should be 'delivers' to agree with the singular subject. 'Frank sticking' is incorrect and replaced with 'For instance'. The song title is corrected and capitalised. 'Through their rang dishonest' is incorrect and replaced with 'talks about'. 'Anna Bad' is removed as it is unclear. 'That this song' is rephrased for clarity. 'During that difficult times' should be 'during difficult times' without 'that'.