Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but a bit fragmented and contains some unclear parts (e.g., 'Anvil ICS'). Try to make your sentences more connected and avoid incomplete phrases. Use linking words to improve flow and clarify your points.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. I especially enjoy singing Thai songs with my friends since they often have meaningful lyrics that I appreciate.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases (e.g., 'this day', 'corral gate room'). Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, connect your ideas smoothly with linking words.

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally, but I wish I had started when I was younger. Nowadays, my friends and I often sing together at parties, which is very enjoyable.

제안: Your answer is quite unclear and fragmented. Try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas more clearly. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and provide specific reasons or examples.

예시: I want to sing for my mom because many songs express the love between parents and children. If I sing for her, I would choose songs that encourage strength and support.

제안: Your answer shows good ideas but is a bit fragmented and has some unclear phrases. Try to use complete sentences and connect your ideas with linking words for better coherence.

예시: Absolutely, singing is like talking but with melody. When people sing, they can express their feelings, which helps them feel more relaxed and happy.

× I really like to sing with my friend.

✓ I really like to sing with my friends.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because it is more natural to sing with more than one friend in this context. Using plural form matches the general meaning and common usage.

× In Thai song.

✓ In Thai songs.

The phrase 'In Thai song.' is a sentence fragment without a verb or subject. It should be connected to the previous sentence or completed. Also, 'song' should be plural 'songs' to match the context of multiple songs.

× Because they always have good meanings.

✓ Because they always have good meanings.

This sentence is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence for clarity. However, grammatically it is correct as a dependent clause. Suggest combining it with the previous sentence for better flow.

× Anvil ICS.

'Anvil ICS.' is unclear and seems to be a transcription error or unrelated phrase. It should be removed or clarified.

× No, I haven't learned.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the object 'how to sing' to clarify what has not been learned. Adding this completes the sentence meaningfully.

× I wish I could learn that when I was younger 'cause this day.

✓ I wish I could have learned that when I was younger because these days,

The phrase 'I wish I could learn that when I was younger' is incorrect because the wish refers to a past opportunity. The correct form is 'I wish I could have learned'. Also, 'cause this day' is unclear and should be 'because these days' to indicate current time.

× Me and my friend sings a lot at the party at at the corral gate room.

✓ My friend and I sing a lot at parties at the Coral Gate room.

'Me and my friend' should be 'My friend and I' for correct subject pronoun order. 'Sings' should be 'sing' to agree with plural subject. 'Party' should be plural 'parties' for general statement. 'Corral gate room' corrected to 'Coral Gate room' assuming proper noun.

× I want to sing for my mom.

✓ I want to sing for my mom.

This sentence is correct; no change needed.

× And there's many songs that talk about love of.

✓ There are many songs that talk about the love of

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and can be omitted. 'There's' (there is) should be 'There are' to agree with plural 'songs'. The phrase 'love of' is incomplete and should be followed by the object.

× Parents and daughter or mom, said daughter.

✓ parents and daughters or mothers and daughters.

The phrase is unclear and ungrammatical. It should be corrected to 'parents and daughters or mothers and daughters' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× If it if I sing, I would say about get stronger.

✓ If I sing, I would say it is about getting stronger.

The sentence has repeated 'if' and lacks clarity. Corrected to a conditional sentence with proper verb forms and structure.

× Absolutely is like you talking, but it's in melody.

✓ Absolutely, it is like you are talking, but it's in melody.

The sentence lacks subject 'it' after 'Absolutely'. Also, 'you talking' should be 'you are talking' for correct verb form.

× So if you sing, you express something out of your.

✓ So if you sing, you express something from your

The sentence ends abruptly with 'your' and is incomplete. It should be completed with a noun like 'heart' or 'body'.

× Body. An I think it helps people be more relaxed and happy.

✓ body. And I think it helps people be more relaxed and happy.

'An' is a typo and should be 'And' to connect the sentences properly.