Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有一些语法错误和拼写错误，比如“saying”应为“singing”，“dress”应为“stress”。建议你注意单词拼写和语法的准确性，同时回答可以更简洁自然，避免重复。

예시: Yes, I really like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. For example, when I sing alone to my favorite songs, I can release stress and express my emotions. Singing helps me forget my worries and enjoy the moment.

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清楚的地方，比如“Why Anthony entered Senior High School”这句话不连贯。建议你注意句子结构的完整性和逻辑性，避免出现无关或错误的信息。

예시: Yes, I started learning to sing when I was six because I enjoy music. However, after I entered senior high school, my schedule became very busy, so I didn't have enough time to practice and eventually gave up.

제안: 你的回答表达了感情，但语法和用词有误，如“support”应为“supports”，“spend”应为“spent”，句子结构不够清晰。建议你注意时态和句子结构，使表达更准确流畅。

예시: I want to sing for my mother because she always supports me in everything. When I was young, I often spent time singing with her to relax and express my feelings. Singing for her is a way to show my gratitude and love.

제안: 你的回答中有拼写错误和重复，如“Same”应为“Singing”，“so dress”应为“stress”。建议你注意单词拼写和句子连贯性，避免重复和错误。

예시: Yes, I really believe that singing can bring happiness to people because when I listen to my favorite songs, I feel more relaxed. For example, cheerful songs make me feel comfortable and help me forget stress.

× Yes, yes, I really like saying because it can make me feel happy and relaxed.

✓ Yes, yes, I really like singing because it can make me feel happy and relaxed.

这里'saying'是动词的错误形式，应该用动名词'singing'表示喜欢做某事。

× For example, when I listen to my favorite songs and singing alone, I can release the dress and express my emotion.

✓ For example, when I listen to my favorite songs and sing alone, I can release the stress and express my emotion.

这里'singing'应改为动词原形'sing'，因为前面有连词'and'连接两个动词，且主语是第一人称单数。

× I can release the dress and express my emotion.

✓ I can release the stress and express my emotion.

单词'dress'错误，应为'stress'（压力），意思更符合语境。

× Saying help me forget my worries and enjoy the moment.

✓ Singing helps me forget my worries and enjoy the moment.

'Saying'应为'singing'，且主语为第三人称单数，谓语动词应加's'。

× Saying help me forget my worries and enjoy the moment.

✓ Singing helps me forget my worries and enjoy the moment.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词help应加s变为helps。

× However. Why Anthony entered Senior High School.

✓ However, when Anthony entered Senior High School.

句子中'Why'用错，应为时间状语从句的连接词'when'。

× My schedule become very busy so I didn't have enough time to practicing and eventually give up.

✓ My schedule became very busy so I didn't have enough time to practice and eventually gave up.

'become'应为过去式'became'，'practicing'应为动词原形'practice'，因为前面有'to'。

× My schedule become very busy so I didn't have enough time to practicing and eventually give up.

✓ My schedule became very busy so I didn't have enough time to practice and eventually gave up.

动词不定式'to'后应接动词原形'practice'，而不是动名词'practicing'。

× I want to sing for my mother because my mother always support me to do anything.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because my mother always supports me to do anything.

主语'my mother'是第三人称单数，谓语动词'support'应加s变为'supports'。

× When I was young, I often spend time to sing with her to relax myself and and the express my feeling thing for her would be a way to show my gratitude and my love.

✓ When I was young, I often spent time singing with her to relax myself and express my feelings for her, which would be a way to show my gratitude and my love.

'spend'应为过去式'spent'，'to sing'应改为动名词'singing'，'and and the express my feeling thing'结构混乱，改为'and express my feelings'更通顺。

× When I was young, I often spend time to sing with her to relax myself and and the express my feeling thing for her would be a way to show my gratitude and my love.

✓ When I was young, I often spent time singing with her to relax myself and express my feelings for her, which would be a way to show my gratitude and my love.

'feeling thing'表达不正确，应为'feelings'，且句子结构需调整使代词使用正确。

× Same can bring happiness to people because when I listen to my favorite songs I feel more relaxed.

✓ Singing can bring happiness to people because when I listen to my favorite songs I feel more relaxed.

'Same'用错，应为'singing'，指代唱歌。

× For example when I listen to cheerful songs I feel more I feel. More comfortable and forget, so dress.

✓ For example, when I listen to cheerful songs, I feel more comfortable and forget my stress.

句子结构混乱，重复且断句错误，需调整为完整通顺的句子。

× For example when I listen to cheerful songs I feel more I feel. More comfortable and forget, so dress.

✓ For example, when I listen to cheerful songs, I feel more comfortable and forget my stress.

'so dress'应为'stress'，且'adjective'和'adverb'使用错误，需改为'comfortable'修饰feel。