Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ не является естественным и понятным. Необходимо строить предложения логично, избегать лишних слов и использовать связки для плавности речи. Также важно отвечать прямо на вопрос, объясняя причину, почему вам нравится пение.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and enjoy time with my friends. We often sing together when we meet at my house, which makes the experience more fun and memorable.

제안: Ответ очень непонятен и неструктурирован. Следует отвечать прямо, используя простые и понятные предложения, объясняя причину отсутствия обучения пению. Избегайте бессвязных фраз и старайтесь использовать связующие слова.

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I haven't had enough time to take singing lessons due to my busy study schedule.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит много ошибок. Нужно четко назвать человека, для которого вы хотите петь, и объяснить, почему. Используйте связки для логичности и избегайте повторений.

예시: I want to sing for my mother because singing together brings me joy and strengthens our bond.

제안: Ответ не соответствует вопросу и не ясен. Следует выразить свое мнение четко и привести причины или примеры, используя связующие слова для логичности.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and connect with others.

× I like singing because.

✓ I like singing because it makes me happy.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main clause after 'because'. To improve, complete the sentence by adding a reason, such as 'it makes me happy'. This forms a complete and meaningful sentence.

× Every day I meet my friends and when.

✓ Every day I meet my friends.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'and when'. Removing the incomplete conjunction and ending the sentence properly improves clarity and correctness.

× We are at my home are.

✓ We are at my home.

The sentence contains a redundant verb 'are' at the end. Removing the extra 'are' corrects the sentence structure.

× Oh, we get involved at this union.

✓ Oh, we get involved in this union.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to use with 'get involved' is 'in'. This corrects the prepositional usage.

× No, I haven't because.

✓ No, I haven't because I haven't had time.

The sentence is incomplete after 'because'. Adding a reason completes the sentence and clarifies the response.

× I have not got to her.

✓ I have not got to have.

The phrase 'got to her' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'have not had'. Correcting the pronoun and verb usage clarifies the sentence.

× Any time to learn how to sing?

✓ I haven't had any time to learn how to sing.

The original is a fragment and lacks a subject and verb. Rewriting as a complete sentence with subject and verb improves clarity.

× Are you really GO trains study.

✓ I am really going to study.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Correcting verb forms and structure makes the sentence meaningful.

× So. I don't. Halftime.

✓ So, I don't have time.

The original is fragmented and unclear. Combining into a complete sentence with proper words improves understanding.

× I want to sing for Meijer, dear person.

✓ I want to sing for my dear person.

'Meijer' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo. Replacing with 'my' corrects the pronoun usage and meaning.

× When we. When we together.

✓ When we are together.

The original is fragmented and incomplete. Completing the sentence with a verb improves clarity.

× It bring me. Some joy.

✓ It brings me some joy.

The verb 'bring' should be in third person singular form 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'It'.

× So are you? I will sing for this person.

✓ So, I will sing for this person.

The phrase 'So are you?' is unclear and unnecessary. Removing it clarifies the sentence.

× No, I don't because mine is seen as.

✓ No, I don't think so because mine is seen as.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'think so' completes the thought and improves clarity.

× Have a successful career in their life.

✓ Having a successful career in their life.

The original is a fragment. Changing to a gerund phrase makes it part of a complete sentence.

× So Cindy and can't bring happiness to people.

✓ So singing can't bring happiness to people.

'Cindy' is likely a mispronunciation of 'singing'. Correcting the word and sentence structure clarifies the meaning.