Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言表达不够自然，存在语法错误和用词不当，如“forgot said lyrics”和“out of town”使用不准确。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，避免冗余。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it is enjoyable and helps me relax after a busy day. However, I am not very good at it, so I usually sing only at home to avoid embarrassing situations.

제안: 回答中存在严重语法和表达错误，如“I'm so bad at saying so”和“very profession now”。建议使用简单明了的句子表达自己没有学过唱歌，并说明原因。

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing because I am not good at it and I don't want to become a professional singer.

제안: 回答内容有趣且有个人色彩，但存在语法错误和表达不清，如“seeing for her”和“sure my sons with her”。建议注意动词使用和句子结构，使表达更清晰自然。

예시: I would probably sing for my cat because she is a patient listener. I enjoy singing to her because she seems relaxed and enjoys the music, even if she doesn't understand the words.

제안: 回答中语法和词汇错误严重，句子不通顺，难以理解。建议用简单句表达唱歌如何帮助缓解压力和提升心情，避免复杂词汇和结构。

예시: Yes, I think singing can make people happy because it helps reduce stress and improve their mood, especially when they feel sad.

× I always forgot said lyrics and out of town so I just saying at my home to avoid some very embarrassing situation.

✓ I always forget the lyrics and go out of tune, so I just sing at home to avoid some very embarrassing situations.

句中使用了错误的动词形式“forgot said”和“saying”，应使用一般现在时“forget”和动词原形“sing”，因为描述的是习惯性动作。

× I always forgot said lyrics and out of town so I just saying at my home to avoid some very embarrassing situation.

✓ I always forget the lyrics and go out of tune, so I just sing at home to avoid some very embarrassing situations.

“forgot”是过去式，但句意表达的是经常发生的事情，应使用一般现在时“forget”。

× I just saying at my home to avoid some very embarrassing situation.

✓ I just sing at home to avoid some very embarrassing situations.

“at my home”应改为“at home”，因为英语中习惯说“at home”表示在家。

× Definitely not, I'm so bad at saying so, I think it's honest.

✓ Definitely not, I'm so bad at singing, so I think it's honest.

“saying”应为“singing”，因为这里表达的是唱歌的能力。

× Sorry to take some very formal classes and I am not aspiration to be a singer so I don't need any very profession now, skills training or instructor for thing.

✓ Sorry, I have never taken any formal classes and I do not aspire to be a singer, so I don't need any professional skills training or instructor.

“some very formal classes”应改为“any formal classes”，表示否定；“any very profession now”应改为“any professional skills training”，词语搭配错误。

× I am not aspiration to be a singer so I don't need any very profession now, skills training or instructor for thing.

✓ I do not aspire to be a singer, so I don't need any professional skills training or instructor.

“I am not aspiration”错误，正确表达应为“I do not aspire”，动词形式错误。

× Probably my cat because she is the most patient audience and always listens to me.

✓ Probably my cat because she is the most patient audience member and always listens to me.

“audience”是集合名词，单数时应加“member”表示“观众成员”。

× I enjoy seeing for her since she seems very relaxed and enjoy the music even though she didn't understand the lyrics.

✓ I enjoy singing for her since she seems very relaxed and enjoys the music even though she doesn't understand the lyrics.

“seeing”应为“singing”，动词错误；“enjoy”应为“enjoys”，主语是第三人称单数；“didn't understand”应为“doesn't understand”，时态错误。

× It make me happy too sure my sons with her.

✓ It makes me happy to share with my son and her.

“make”应为“makes”，主语是第三人称单数；“sons”应为“son”，根据上下文推测是单数。

× Yes, I think so because saying Cambrie the emotional stress to people especially where I feel very depressed, maybe seeing, seeing or less in some very positive so can help them to both their mood.

✓ Yes, I think so because singing can relieve the emotional stress of people, especially when I feel very depressed. Maybe singing or listening to some positive songs can help improve their mood.

“saying Cambrie”应为“singing can relieve”，动词错误；句子结构混乱，需调整表达。

× It's very infective.

✓ It's very effective.

“infective”意思是“传染性的”，应改为“effective”，表示“有效的”。