Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有多处发音错误（如'seeing'应为'singing'，'dinner'应为'singer'），影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意发音准确，同时回答应更自然流畅，避免重复表达。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I'm not a good singer. Whenever I try, I feel embarrassed since I can't hit the right notes, so I usually avoid singing in public.

제안: 回答中出现了明显的词汇错误（如'swim'应为'sing'，'sharp seeing'不合适），导致表达不清晰。建议加强词汇准确性，并且回答应紧扣问题，避免跑题。

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing properly because I don't think I have a good voice. Also, I feel a bit shy singing in front of others, so I usually avoid it.

제안: 回答中多处发音和用词错误（如'saying'应为'singing'），句子结构不够清晰。建议注意发音和语法，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I don't have much talent for singing, but if I had to choose, I would sing for my girlfriend. I think it would be a special way to express my feelings and make her happy. Singing for someone you care about always feels more meaningful.

제안: 回答表达不完整且有语法错误（如'As saying'应为'singing'，'It can't bring'应为'It can bring'），建议加强句子完整性和语法准确性。

예시: Yes, definitely. Singing can express someone's feelings. It can bring happiness to others, but also sometimes sadness.

× I don't like seeing because I'm not a good dinner.

✓ I don't like singing because I'm not a good singer.

这里'seeing'是动词的现在分词形式，但句意应表达“唱歌”，应使用'singing'。另外，'dinner'是名词，意为“晚餐”，应改为'singer'表示“歌手”。

× Whenever I try to sing, I feel a bit embarrassed since I can't hit the right notes, so I usually avoid singing in public.

✓ Whenever I try to sing, I feel a bit embarrassed since I can't hit the right notes, so I usually avoid singing in public.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× To be honest, I have never learned how to swim properly because I don't think I have a good voice.

✓ To be honest, I have never learned how to sing properly because I don't think I have a good voice.

句中'swim'（游泳）与上下文不符，应为'sing'（唱歌）。此处不是时态错误，而是词汇错误，因题目要求只纠正语法错误，故不修改。

× Besides, I feel a bit sharp seeing in front of other people so I already avoid it.

✓ Besides, I feel a bit shy singing in front of other people so I already avoid it.

'sharp seeing'不符合语法和语义，应为'shy singing'，表示“害羞地唱歌”。'seeing'应改为'singing'。

× Will I don't have much talent for saying but if I have to choose I was saying for my girlfriend I think it would be a special way to express my feelings and make her happy.

✓ Well, I don't have much talent for singing but if I have to choose I would sing for my girlfriend. I think it would be a special way to express my feelings and make her happy.

'Will'应为'Well'，表示语气词。'saying'应为'singing'。'was saying'时态错误，应为'would sing'表示假设。

× Seeing for someone you care about always feels more meaningful.

✓ Singing for someone you care about always feels more meaningful.

'Seeing'应为'singing'，表示“唱歌”。

× As saying, express someone's feelings.

✓ As singing expresses someone's feelings.

'As saying'应为'As singing'，且句子缺少谓语动词，应改为完整句子'As singing expresses someone's feelings.'

× It can't bring other people happiness and also sadness.

✓ It can bring other people happiness and also sadness.

句中'can't'与上下文意思矛盾，应为肯定句'can'。