Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi chính tả. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn và tránh những câu không liên quan hoặc không rõ nghĩa.

예시: No, I don't like singing because I am not confident in my singing ability. I often feel shy when I have to sing in front of others, so I prefer listening to music instead.

제안: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng câu có lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và lặp ý. Hãy chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp lại cùng một ý. Bạn cũng nên thêm một vài chi tiết để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I prefer listening to music because I am not confident in my singing skills.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không đúng, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, chính xác và tránh những từ không phù hợp. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể.

예시: I would like to sing for someone special, like my close friend or family member, to express my feelings. Singing a romantic song can create a memorable moment.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lỗi chính tả. Hãy đưa ra quan điểm cân bằng và giải thích cụ thể hơn.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to many people because it helps them express their emotions. However, some people may feel shy or uncomfortable singing in public, so they prefer listening to music instead.

× No, I don't really like singing because I'm not confident it my singing ability.

✓ No, I don't really like singing because I'm not confident in my singing ability.

The preposition 'in' is required after 'confident' to indicate the area of confidence. Using 'it' is incorrect here.

× I feel shy when seeing a phantom.

✓ I feel shy when singing in front of people.

The original sentence is unclear and likely a typo ('phantom'). The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× Orders so I prefer listening to miss Music is dead.

✓ Therefore, I prefer listening to music instead.

The original sentence contains unclear words ('Orders', 'miss Music is dead') and lacks proper structure. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× No, I haven't ever taken formal singing lesson.

✓ No, I haven't ever taken formal singing lessons.

The noun 'lesson' should be plural 'lessons' to match the context of multiple sessions. Also, 'haven't ever taken' is correct present perfect tense.

× I prefer listening to music rather than singing an I'm not confident in my singing ability.

✓ I prefer listening to music rather than singing because I'm not confident in my singing ability.

The original sentence lacks a conjunction to connect the two clauses properly. Adding 'because' improves clarity and sentence structure.

× I would love to sing for someone special to expressed my feelings.

✓ I would love to sing for someone special to express my feelings.

The verb after 'to' should be in base form 'express', not past tense 'expressed'.

× Singing a romantic song can be a memorable jet tool, and I believe music can convey emotion better than work.

✓ Singing a romantic song can be a memorable gesture, and I believe music can convey emotion better than words.

The original sentence contains typos ('jet tool' instead of 'gesture', 'work' instead of 'words') and unclear meaning. The correction fixes these errors.

× It's Karen. How?

✓ It's caring. How?

Likely a typo; 'Karen' should be 'caring' to make sense in context. The sentence is still a fragment but kept as is due to unclear context.

× No, not everyone realize singing.

✓ No, not everyone realizes singing.

Subject-verb agreement error; 'everyone' is singular and requires 'realizes'. Also, 'realizes singing' is awkward; better to say 'realizes the joy of singing' but correction limited to grammar problem list.

× Some people feel shy about their singing skill and they might prefer listening to Music is Dead.

✓ Some people feel shy about their singing skills and they might prefer listening to music instead.

The noun 'skill' should be plural 'skills' to match 'some people'. Also, 'Music is Dead' seems to be a misheard phrase; replaced with 'music instead' for clarity.

× In some cases. Singing can be seen and annoying.

✓ In some cases, singing can be seen as annoying.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains a typo ('and' instead of 'as'). The correction fixes sentence structure and word choice.