Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и понятным. Следует использовать простые и правильные предложения, избегать повторений и неясных фраз. Также важно объяснить, почему вам нравится пение, с конкретными примерами.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I am busy. For example, I often sing at home to relieve stress and feel happier.

제안: Ответ должен быть более связным и логичным. Следует использовать правильные времена и грамматические конструкции, а также конкретизировать, какой стиль пения вы изучали и когда.

예시: I have been learning to sing by myself recently. When I was a child, I started singing different types of music, such as rock and pop.

제안: Ответ должен быть более чётким и грамматически правильным. Следует прямо ответить на вопрос и перечислить конкретных людей, для которых вы хотите петь, используя связные предложения.

예시: I want to sing for my family members, such as my parents, uncles, and brothers, because they support me a lot.

제안: Ответ должен быть более связным и содержательным. Следует объяснить, почему пение приносит счастье, используя логичные причины и примеры, а также избегать повторений.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and forget their worries. When you sing, you focus on the music instead of your problems.

× Actually I like singing for why I always seen in my home and it's helped me.

✓ Actually, I like singing because I am always seen singing at home and it helps me.

The sentence uses incorrect verb forms 'seen' and 'helped' which do not agree with the present tense context. 'Seen' should be 'seen singing' or better 'seen singing' is awkward; better to say 'I am always singing at home'. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to match present tense. The sentence also lacks proper conjunction and prepositions.

× It helped me when I'm busy and some solutions for my.

✓ It helps me when I'm busy and provides some solutions for me.

The verb 'helped' is in past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate. 'Some solutions for my' is incomplete and should be 'some solutions for me'.

× Some examples. Cancel.

✓ Some examples: cancel.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. It seems the speaker intended to give examples but did not complete the thought. 'Cancel' is unclear in this context and should be omitted or clarified.

× And now I learn seeing at myself and.

✓ And now I am learning to sing by myself.

The phrase 'learn seeing at myself' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'learning to sing by myself'. The verb 'learn' should be followed by the infinitive 'to sing' and 'by myself' indicates doing it alone.

× When I was childhood I began to singing music, some type of music's like rock.

✓ When I was a child, I began singing music, some types of music like rock.

'When I was childhood' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a child'. 'Began to singing' is incorrect; 'began singing' is correct. 'Some type of music's like rock' should be 'some types of music like rock'.

× Uh, like and. Chemical.

✓ Uh, like rock and chemical music.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper conjunctions. 'Like and' is incomplete; it should be 'like rock and chemical music' to list music types properly.

× That's all.

✓ That's all.

No correction needed; sentence is acceptable as a closing statement.

× Anne. I have out of a people for scene and like.

✓ Well, I have some people to sing for and like...

The sentence is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns and structure. 'Anne' is unclear; possibly 'And'. 'I have out of a people for scene' is incorrect; should be 'I have some people to sing for'.

× Oh, like my parents? Like my uncle or? Uncle or uncle's or my brothers and that's all.

✓ Oh, like my parents, my uncle, or my brothers, and that's all.

The sentence has repeated and incorrect pronouns and possessive forms. 'Uncle or uncle's' is incorrect; should be 'my uncle'. The sentence should list family members clearly.

× Actually, yes, because when you are singing and you, you will be happy and.

✓ Actually, yes, because when you are singing, you will be happy.

The sentence is incomplete and has unnecessary repetition. 'You, you will be happy and' should be simplified to 'you will be happy'.

× If you are singing, you don't work and.

✓ If you are singing, you are not working.

The sentence uses incorrect conjunction 'and' at the end and mixes tenses. It should be a complete sentence without 'and'.

× You don't busy in this time.

✓ You are not busy at this time.

'Don't busy' is incorrect; 'are not busy' is correct. Also, 'in this time' should be 'at this time'.

× Is that so?

✓ Isn't that so?

The question tag 'Is that so?' is acceptable but 'Isn't that so?' is more natural in this context.