Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，导致意思难以理解。建议你直接回答问题，表达你是否喜欢唱歌，并说明原因，注意语法和用词的准确性。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me boost my confidence and relax after a busy day.

제안: 你的回答语法混乱，表达不清楚。建议你直接回答是否学过唱歌，并简要说明原因，使用正确的句子结构和词汇。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I haven't had enough money to pay for them.

제안: 你的回答表达不够自然，部分词汇使用不当。建议你直接回答你想为谁唱歌，并说明原因，使用更合适的词汇和句子结构。

예시: I want to sing for my girlfriend because I believe it can bring her joy and make her feel special.

제안: 你的回答语法和表达有较多错误，影响理解。建议你清晰表达你的观点，使用连贯的句子和合适的词汇，说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

예시: Yes, I strongly believe that singing can bring happiness to people because it helps boost their confidence and lifts their mood.

× Is our legacy need because I think thinking can help me to boost my confidence.

✓ I like singing because I think it can help me to boost my confidence.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不通顺。应明确表达喜欢唱歌的原因，使用完整句子。建议使用“I like singing because...”结构。

× Oh no, actually I have divers learn how to see becauses I have per money to support my to improve my singing skills.

✓ Oh no, actually I have never learned how to sing because I don't have enough money to support my singing lessons.

原句中“have divers learn”错误，应该使用现在完成时的否定形式“have never learned”。“see”应为“sing”。“per money”应为“enough money”。句子表达不清，需调整词汇和时态。

× Oh no, actually I have divers learn how to see becauses I have per money to support my to improve my singing skills.

✓ Oh no, actually I have never learned how to sing because I don't have enough money to support me to improve my singing skills.

“to support my to improve”结构不正确，应改为“to support me to improve”，即动词后接宾语和动词不定式。

× I want to see my girlfriend because I think I can give her some beauty and some happiness.

✓ I want to sing for my girlfriend because I think I can give her some beauty and some happiness.

“see my girlfriend”应为“sing for my girlfriend”，动词使用错误。

× Yes, I'm strongly think lighter singing can. Support to happiness for people because. Sing can help people to post to the their confidence.

✓ Yes, I strongly think singing can support happiness for people because singing can help people to boost their confidence.

“I'm strongly think”应为“I strongly think”，去掉“am”。“lighter singing”应为“singing”。“post to the their confidence”应为“boost their confidence”。句子中形容词和副词使用错误，需调整。