Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意时态和单词拼写。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持观点。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax after a long day. For example, when I come home from work, I often sing my favorite songs to relieve stress and enjoy the music.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，建议使用正确的时态和动词形式，并且结构更清晰。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节说明。

예시: No, I have never formally learned how to sing, but I often practice singing with my good friend at KTV. Although I'm not a professional, I think my singing has improved a lot.

제안: 回答中有词汇使用错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议用更准确的词汇表达感情，并且句子结构要完整。可以先直接回答问题，然后用理由支持。

예시: I want to sing for my good friends because they have always supported me. Singing for them is a way to show my gratitude and appreciation.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并用具体例子支持。注意时态和单词拼写。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax. For example, when I sing with my good friends, I feel very happy.

× Do you like singing? Yes, Alexie. And because it helped me relax the after a long day.

✓ Yes, Alexie. I like singing because it helps me relax after a long day.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，且多余的问句“Do you like singing?”不应出现在回答中。应将句子调整为完整的陈述句，明确表达喜欢唱歌的原因。

× For example, when I come home from work, I often see my favorite cells too.

✓ For example, when I come home from work, I often sing my favorite songs too.

原句中“see my favorite cells”用词错误，应该是“sing my favorite songs”，这里是代词和名词的错误使用。

× Relieve stress and a few happier seeing also allowed me to express my moment and enjoying the music.

✓ Singing helps me relieve stress and feel happier. It also allows me to express my emotions and enjoy the music.

原句语序混乱，缺少主语和谓语，且表达不清晰。需要重组句子，使其语法正确且表达明确。

× I learned how to sing. No, I have never learned how to sing, but I often practicing with my good friend Saga KTV.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing, but I often practice with my good friend at Saga KTV.

“practicing”应改为动词原形“practice”，因为前面有助动词“often”表示习惯动作，时态应为一般现在时。

× Although I'm not a professional singer, I think my things go has improved significantly.

✓ Although I'm not a professional singer, I think my singing has improved significantly.

“my things go has improved”结构错误，应该是“my singing has improved”，修正主语和谓语搭配。

× I want to sing for my good friends because they are very cute and clever, say always supported me in everything I do, so seeing for them would be a way to show me gratitude and the approach fication.

✓ I want to sing for my good friends because they are very kind and clever, and they have always supported me in everything I do, so singing for them would be a way to show my gratitude and appreciation.

原句中“say always supported me”应为“they have always supported me”，且“seeing”应为“singing”，“me gratitude and the approach fication”表达错误，应为“my gratitude and appreciation”。代词和词汇使用错误。

× Yes, after you seeing camporee happy news to people because it helps them relax.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax.

原句结构混乱，“after you seeing camporee happy news to people”无意义，应改为正确表达“singing can bring happiness to people”。

× For example, what I seen with my good friends, I will feel happy.

✓ For example, when I sing with my good friends, I feel happy.

“what I seen”用法错误，应为“when I sing”，且时态应为一般现在时，表达习惯性动作。