Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more coherent and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and ensure your sentences are complete. Also, avoid redundancy by expressing your feelings clearly in fewer words.

예시: Yes, I definitely like singing because it allows me to express my emotions freely. When I sing, I feel that my feelings find a safe place, which is very comforting.

제안: Avoid fragmented sentences and try to combine your ideas into complete, coherent sentences. Use linking words like 'but' or 'because' properly to explain your reasons clearly.

예시: Not really. My parents sent me to a singing lesson when I was young, but I only took one lesson because I didn't really enjoy singing as a child.

제안: Try to avoid informal phrases like 'wanna' and 'you know' in your answers. Also, combine short sentences to improve fluency and coherence, and use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: Mostly, I prefer to sing for myself because I feel quite nervous and shy when singing in front of other people. Therefore, I feel more relaxed when I am humming or singing casually alone.

제안: Make sure your sentences are complete and connected logically. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and avoid sentence fragments.

예시: I definitely think singing can bring happiness to people because music has the power to ease people's minds and bring them joy.

× And I love singing because I can really feel myself.

✓ And I love singing because I can really feel myself.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not contain errors from the provided grammar problem list.

× Through the songs and.

✓ Through the songs.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'and.' Removing 'and' completes the sentence and corrects the sentence structure error.

× I feel like when I'm singing, my emotions kind of. Found a safe place.

✓ I feel like when I'm singing, my emotions kind of find a safe place.

The verb 'found' is past tense, but the sentence context requires present tense 'find' to match 'I feel like' and 'when I'm singing.' This corrects the tense inconsistency and sentence structure.

× Not really, my parents sent me to a singing lesson when I was young, but I. Only took one lesson.

✓ Not really, my parents sent me to a singing lesson when I was young, but I only took one lesson.

The period after 'I' incorrectly breaks the sentence. Removing the period and combining the sentence corrects the sentence structure and maintains the past tense usage.

× Because I didn't really feel like. Singing when I was a child.

✓ Because I didn't really feel like singing when I was a child.

The period after 'like' incorrectly breaks the sentence. Removing the period and combining the sentence corrects the sentence structure and maintains correct preposition usage.

× I feel quite nervous and shy when I'm singing around the people.

✓ I feel quite nervous and shy when I'm singing around people.

The definite article 'the' before 'people' is unnecessary here because it refers to people in general, not specific people. Removing 'the' corrects the pronoun usage.

× Or singing in public.

✓ Or singing in public.

This sentence fragment is acceptable as a continuation of the previous sentence and does not contain errors from the provided grammar problem list.

× I feel more relaxed when I'm just, you know, humming or just singing randomly.

✓ I feel more relaxed when I'm just, you know, humming or just singing randomly.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not contain errors from the provided grammar problem list.

× I think music has the power. To ease people's mind and. Bringing them happiness.

✓ I think music has the power to ease people's minds and bring them happiness.

The original sentences are fragmented and incorrectly use 'bringing' instead of 'bring.' Combining the sentences and using the correct verb forms corrects the sentence structure and verb usage.