Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有较多语法和表达错误，影响了语言的自然流畅。建议加强基本语法练习，尤其是动词形式和句子结构，同时避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel confident and happy.

제안: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议学习正确的时态和句子结构，避免断句不连贯。

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing properly, but I would like to try and improve in the future.

제안: 回答内容较好，但句子断断续续，缺少连贯性。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意语法和拼写。

예시: I want to sing for my best friends because they always support me and make me feel confident, so I don't worry about making mistakes.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，句子不完整。建议练习完整句子表达，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when my family sings together, we feel happy and joyful.

× I love saying.

✓ I love singing.

这里'saying'是动词'say'的现在分词形式，但句子中应使用'sing'的现在分词'singing'，因为题目是关于唱歌。动词+ing形式用错了。

× 'Cause I feel confidence being I saying.

✓ 'Cause I feel confident when I sing.

'confidence'是名词，句中应使用形容词'confident'来描述感受；'being I saying'结构不正确，应改为'when I sing'，正确使用代词和动词形式。

× And I believe singing can make me happy.

✓ And I believe singing can make me happy.

该句语法正确，动词+ing形式使用正确，无需修改。

× No, I have never known how to seam.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing.

'known'用法错误，应该用'learned'表示学会；'seam'拼写错误，应为'sing'。时态应为现在完成时，表示至今未学会。

× Are you saying Siri is a difficult?

✓ Are you saying singing is difficult?

'Siri'拼写错误，应为'singing'；'a difficult'结构错误，'difficult'是形容词，不加冠词。代词和词汇使用错误。

× And I never. Try. Do it better.

✓ And I have never tried to do it better.

句子结构混乱，缺少完整谓语，应使用现在完成时'have never tried'，并用不定式'to do'表达目的。

× I want to sing for my best friends 'cause they. Always support me and make me feel confident.

✓ I want to sing for my best friends 'cause they always support me and make me feel confident.

句中'friends'复数形式正确，句子中断号使用不当，应连贯表达。

× I don't feel worried about making mistake.

✓ I don't feel worried about making mistakes.

'mistake'应使用复数形式'mistakes'，表示泛指错误。量词使用错误。

× Because in my family. We you need singing Together we feel happy and joyful.

✓ Because in my family, we sing together and feel happy and joyful.

句子结构错误，'We you need singing'无意义，应改为'we sing together'；句中缺少连词和正确的谓语。

× Because in my family. We you need singing Together we feel happy and joyful.

✓ Because in my family, we sing together and feel happy and joyful.

'We you need singing'中'you'使用错误，应去掉，保持主语一致。