Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a more confident and clear answer. Start with a direct response, then explain your feelings with linking words to make it coherent. Avoid filler words like 'I guess'.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax. However, I usually sing alone in my room since I feel shy about my voice and prefer not to sing in front of others.

제안: Provide a clear and structured answer. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will improve clarity.

예시: No, I have never formally learnt how to sing. However, I enjoy listening to singers and songs in movies. If I get the chance in the future, I would definitely like to learn singing because I love it.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Explain your reason with linking words to make your answer logical.

예시: I want to sing for myself because it makes me happy. I believe singing is a personal joy rather than something to impress others.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using better linking words and correcting grammar. Also, be more specific and concise in your explanation.

예시: Yes, absolutely. Singing brings happiness because many people do it out of passion. Moreover, it helps to relax the mind and improve mood. For example, whenever I feel sad or stressed, I sing alone to relieve my stress.

× I guess I like singing.

✓ I think I like singing.

The phrase 'I guess' is less appropriate here as it implies uncertainty. 'I think' is more suitable to express a personal preference in present tense.

× I don't want to sing in front of the people and feel embarrassed.

✓ I don't want to sing in front of people and feel embarrassed.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'people' when speaking generally. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

In American English, 'learned' is the correct past participle form. 'Learnt' is British English but less common in some contexts.

× How to sing No I don't learn to sing I prefer to listen to the singers or movies where the song was singing and yes if I have an opportunity to learn sing singing in future I will go for it because I love singing and.

✓ How to sing? No, I haven't learned to sing. I prefer to listen to singers or songs in movies. Yes, if I have an opportunity to learn singing in the future, I will go for it because I love singing.

The original sentence is a run-on with missing punctuation and incorrect verb forms. Breaking it into clear sentences and correcting verb tenses improves clarity and grammar.

× I want to sing for myself because I love myself and. Instead of. People are like other individuals.

✓ I want to sing for myself because I love myself. Instead of singing for other people, I prefer to sing for myself.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding missing parts and correcting prepositions clarifies the meaning.

× People are like other individuals.

✓ People are different from other individuals.

The phrase 'are like' is incorrect here; 'different from' correctly expresses contrast between groups.

× Yes absolutely singing and bring happiness to the people because many people sing for their passion and some people saying to relax their mind and lift up the mood.

✓ Yes, absolutely, singing brings happiness to people because many people sing for their passion, and some people sing to relax their mind and lift their mood.

'The people' is incorrect when speaking generally; 'people' without 'the' is correct. Also, verb forms are corrected for subject-verb agreement and tense.

× For example whenever I'm sad or when I'm tired and stressed, I started singing alone which should leave my stress.

✓ For example, whenever I'm sad or tired and stressed, I start singing alone, which helps relieve my stress.

The verb 'started' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'start'. Also, 'helps relieve' is a better expression than 'should leave' for stress reduction.