Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在发音和用词错误，如“saying”应为“singing”，“film me relaxed”应为“make me feel relaxed”，“motion”应为“emotion”。建议注意发音准确性，使用正确词汇表达情感，并且句子结构应更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I like singing very much because it always makes me feel relaxed. When I sing, I feel I can express my emotions freely.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing yet, but I think it would be interesting to learn because I really like singing.

제안: 回答内容混乱，语法错误多，表达不完整。建议练习用完整句子表达想法，避免重复和无意义的词汇，清晰说明原因。

예시: I want to sing for my mother because she always supports me in doing what I love, and I think she would enjoy my singing.

제안: 回答中有严重语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子表达观点，并用具体理由支持。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music is a special way to express feelings and connect with others.

× I like saying very much.

✓ I like singing very much.

动词 'like' 后面应该接动名词形式，'singing' 是正确的形式，'saying' 意思是“说话”，与语境不符。

× It's always film me relaxed and when I was saying.

✓ It always makes me feel relaxed when I am singing.

原句中 'film me relaxed' 是错误搭配，应使用 'makes me feel relaxed' 表达使我感到放松。'when I was saying' 应为 'when I am singing'，时态和动词形式需调整。

× I feel I can express my motion.

✓ I feel I can express my emotion.

'motion' 是“运动”，应为 'emotion' 表示“情感”，符合语境。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt' 是英式英语过去分词，'learned' 是美式英语，两者均可，但根据上下文统一用美式英语更合适。

× Of how the chance I think I will learn about how to sing is interesting.

✓ If I have the chance, I think I will learn how to sing because it is interesting.

原句结构混乱，缺少连词和主语，需重组句子使其通顺。

× And I like being very much.

✓ And I like singing very much.

'like' 后应接动名词，'being' 意思是“存在”，不符合语境，应为 'singing'。

× Be 'cause he always she always supposed me to do.

✓ Because she always supports me to do it.

原句中 'he always she always' 是错误的代词使用，应为 'she always'。'supposed' 用错，应为 'supports'。

× What I want to do?

✓ What I want to do is sing.

原句缺少谓语，句子不完整，需补充谓语使句子完整。

× Yeah, and. **** like like me saying songs. Yeah.

✓ Yeah, and I like singing songs.

原句中 '**** like like me saying songs' 语法混乱，代词和动词形式错误，需简化为 'I like singing songs'。

× Yes, I do think saying can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness to people.

'saying' 意为“说话”，应为 'singing' 表示“唱歌”，符合语境。

× In last offer people thinking the thought thing at music is a special express.

✓ In the past, people thought that music is a special form of expression.

原句结构混乱，词语使用错误，需重组句子并更正词汇使其通顺且符合语境。