Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp và câu không mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. When I was a child, I used to sing everywhere, especially in the bathroom where the acoustics are good. Even now, I often sing with my friends on weekends for fun.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác và câu không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng và dễ hiểu hơn.

예시: No, I have never taken professional singing lessons because I think it requires a lot of time and money. For me, singing is just a way to relax and have fun.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I enjoy singing for my family and friends because it helps us feel closer. We often sing together on weekends, which is very enjoyable and relaxing for all of us.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng và dễ hiểu hơn.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. It is a good way to relieve stress, especially after a hard day at work or during difficult times. Singing alone or with others can make people feel better and more connected.

× I sent a song everywhere when they were a child, especially in the bathroom where I can acoustic show my talent there.

✓ I sang songs everywhere when I was a child, especially in the bathroom where I could acoustically show my talent.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'sent' instead of 'sang' for the action of singing. Also, 'they were a child' is incorrect; it should be 'I was a child' to match the subject. 'Can acoustic show' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'could acoustically show' to express past ability and correct adverb use.

× I sent a song everywhere when they were a child, especially in the bathroom where I can acoustic show my talent there.

✓ I sang songs everywhere when I was a child, especially in the bathroom where I could acoustically show my talent.

The phrase 'a song everywhere' is incorrect because 'song' should be plural to indicate multiple instances. Also, 'they were a child' is a singular subject, so 'they' should be 'I'.

× Until now I still lies singing with my friend at the weekend when we are together.

✓ Until now, I still sing with my friends on weekends when we are together.

The verb 'lies' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'sing' to describe the action. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context, and 'at the weekend' is better expressed as 'on weekends'.

× I haven't ever learned how to sink in the rofessional place yet.

✓ I haven't ever learned how to sing in a professional place yet.

The word 'sink' is a typo and should be 'sing'. 'Rofessional' is a misspelling of 'professional'. The sentence uses present perfect tense correctly, but the errors are spelling mistakes affecting meaning.

× I thought that's when I'd spend much money and time on practice singing with amuses and his weight and an money.

✓ I thought that I would spend a lot of money and time practicing singing with musicians and their guidance and money.

The phrase 'on practice singing' is incorrect; it should be 'practicing singing'. 'Amuses and his weight and an money' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'musicians and their guidance and money' to make sense. 'Much money' is better expressed as 'a lot of money' in this context.

× I thought that's when I'd spend much money and time on practice singing with amuses and his weight and an money.

✓ I thought that I would spend a lot of money and time practicing singing with musicians and their guidance and money.

The pronouns 'his' and 'an' are incorrectly used here. 'His' should be 'their' to agree with the plural noun 'musicians'. 'An money' is incorrect; 'money' is uncountable and does not take an article.

× Singing HS relaxation and entertainment for me.

✓ Singing is relaxation and entertainment for me.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'is' to link the subject and complement. 'HS' seems to be a typo and should be 'is'.

× I really enjoy singing from my family and friends because it brings earth to closer together.

✓ I really enjoy singing with my family and friends because it brings us closer together.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect; it should be 'with' to indicate participation. 'Earth' is incorrect and should be 'us' to refer to people. 'To closer together' is incorrect; it should be 'closer together' without 'to'.

× On weekends we often have practice where we sing and had a lot of fun singing.

✓ On weekends, we often have practice where we sing and have a lot of fun singing.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past tense 'had'. To maintain consistency, both verbs should be in present tense 'have'.

× Have her relax and enjoy E companies which made those moment very special.

✓ We relax and enjoy each other's company, which makes those moments very special.

'Have her relax' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'we relax'. 'E companies' is a typo for 'each other's company'. 'Made those moment' should be 'makes those moments' to agree in number and tense.

× Yes of caught singing he a good way to have earth really just effectively, especially after hard working day or breaking up with someone you sing along or sing together with someone is Ada would way to really just.

✓ Yes, singing is a good way to relax and feel better, especially after a hard working day or breaking up with someone. Singing alone or together with someone is a good way to feel better.

The original sentence is largely incoherent with many errors. Corrected to a clear present tense statement about singing's benefits. 'Caught' is incorrect; 'singing is' is correct. 'Earth' should be 'us' or 'feel better'. The sentence structure and word choice are corrected for clarity and grammar.