Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多，导致意思难以理解。建议你用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并用具体理由支持你的观点。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I find it difficult to sing well. However, I enjoy listening to others sing because it helps me relax.

제안: 回答中语法混乱，表达不连贯。建议你用完整句子说明你是否学过唱歌，并简要说明学习的时间或经历。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in elementary and high school because music classes were compulsory. But now, I have forgotten most of what I learned.

제안: 你的回答内容混乱，难以理解。建议你直接回答问题，明确说明你想为谁唱歌，并解释原因。

예시: If I have a chance, I want to sing for my mother because she has taken good care of me. Singing for her would be a way to show my gratitude.

제안: 回答不连贯，表达不清楚。建议你用简单句子说明唱歌如何带给人们快乐，并举例说明。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness. For example, people feel joyful when they sing at concerts or with friends, and sometimes singing helps express other emotions too.

× Actually, I dislike seeking becauses seeing is very hard to meet an unwary, hard to follow the red zone.

✓ Actually, I dislike singing because singing is very hard to master, hard to follow the red zone.

这里'seeking'和'seeing'是拼写错误，应该是'singing'。另外，'becauses'是拼写错误，应该是'because'。句中'adjective or adverb'使用不当，'hard to meet an unwary'表达不清，应改为'hard to master'。

× Yeah, but I wanna have more free time.

✓ Yeah, but I want to have more free time.

'wanna'是口语缩写，正式场合应使用完整形式'want to'。

× I'm very enjoying to listen other seeing Yeah, that could help me relaxing.

✓ I really enjoy listening to other singing. Yeah, that could help me relax.

'I'm very enjoying'语法错误，应为'I enjoy'或'I am enjoying'。'to listen other seeing'应为'listening to other singing'。'help me relaxing'应为'help me relax'。

× Yeah, of course, in the Chinese, like elementary school and the high and high school mostly students of all the students must learn music classes.

✓ Yeah, of course, in China, like in elementary school and high school, most students must take music classes.

'in the Chinese'应为'in China'。'the high and high school'重复且错误，应为'high school'。'mostly students of all the students'表达重复，应为'most students'。'learn music classes'应为'take music classes'。

× Yeah, but no, I already forgot it.

✓ Yeah, but no, I have already forgotten it.

'already forgot'时态错误，应该用现在完成时'have already forgotten'表示过去发生且对现在有影响的动作。

× If you have chance, I want to see, I want to sell some from my mouth 'cause he's very important person for me.

✓ If I have a chance, I want to sing, I want to sing something from my heart because she is a very important person to me.

'If you have chance'应为'If I have a chance'。'I want to see'应为'I want to sing'。'sell some from my mouth'表达错误，应为'sing something from my heart'。'he's'指代错误，应为'she is'。

× And she, she is very hard to take care of me.

✓ And she takes very good care of me.

'she is very hard to take care of me'表达错误，应为'she takes very good care of me'。

× So I think she is very hard and I want to express my thanks.

✓ So I think she is very kind and I want to express my thanks.

'she is very hard'表达不当，'hard'通常指困难或坚硬，应该用'kind'表示她很善良。

× So you have changed, I think. There's a good man.

✓ So you have changed, I think. He is a good man.

'There's a good man'与上下文不连贯，应改为'He is a good man'。

× This depend different situation like like concert saying and hold hold the private happy for mostly coffee for most people but includes some sad saying hood provides another emotion for people.

✓ This depends on different situations like concerts and private events. Singing mostly makes people happy, but some sad songs provide other emotions for people.

句子结构混乱，'depend'应为'depends on'。'concert saying'应为'concerts and singing'。'hold hold the private happy for mostly coffee'无意义，应改为'private events'。'sad saying hood'应为'sad songs'。整体需要重组句子使其通顺。