Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cavabınızda fikrinizi aydın və məntiqli ifadə etmək üçün sadə və düzgün cümlələrdən istifadə edin. Mövzunu birbaşa cavablandırın və əlavə dəstəkləyici məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə təqdim edin.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it allows me to express my emotions. I have participated in a local choir, which helped me improve my skills and enjoy music more.

제안: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvləri azaltmağa çalışın və sözləri düzgün tələffüz edin. Əlavə olaraq, əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edərək fikirlərinizi daha axıcı edin.

예시: Yes, I have learned how to sing before. I took part in a singing course where the teacher taught us how to control our breathing and improve our voice. This was very helpful because I learned techniques to sing more confidently.

제안: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və qısa edin. Mövzunu birbaşa cavablandırın və əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə təqdim edin.

예시: I want to sing for my son, who is 9 months old. I often sing lullabies to help him sleep, and he seems to enjoy my voice.

제안: Fikirlərinizi daha aydın ifadə etmək üçün sadə və düzgün cümlələrdən istifadə edin. Əlaqələndirici sözlərlə fikirlərinizi məntiqli şəkildə birləşdirin.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because melodies can inspire and change people's moods. A good song can make people feel joyful and relaxed.

× Yes I do, I like singing because I have a voice and also I participated in the opposite universe, these horse team and also I made my cell made here and he also like thinking also he was the path in the past in his past the singer.

✓ Yes, I do. I like singing because I have a voice. I also participated in the opposite universe, this horse team, and I made my cell made here. He also likes thinking; he was the path in the past, in his past, the singer.

The sentence contains unclear and incorrect pronoun usage, making it difficult to understand who 'he' refers to and how the pronouns relate to the subjects. Pronouns should clearly refer to specific nouns to avoid confusion.

× Guess I have learned how to sing before.

✓ I guess I have learned how to sing before.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' at the beginning, which is necessary for correct sentence structure and tense usage.

× I took part in singing course where the teacher taught us how to control our breathing and improve our voice.

✓ I took part in a singing course where the teacher taught us how to control our breathing and improve our voice.

The phrase 'in singing course' is missing the article 'a' before 'singing course'. Articles are important to specify nouns correctly.

× It was very helpful because I learned techniques to sync more confidently.

✓ It was very helpful because I learned techniques to sing more confidently.

The word 'sync' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'sing'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a quantifier issue, but it affects the meaning of the sentence.

× I want to sing for my son now I he is 9 months and I'm thinking here for him lullabee when he's sleeping and it's very helpful for me because it helps him to sleep and he likes my voice.

✓ I want to sing for my son now. He is 9 months old, and I sing lullabies for him when he's sleeping. It's very helpful for me because it helps him to sleep, and he likes my voice.

The sentence has incorrect and confusing pronoun usage, such as 'I he is' and 'I'm thinking here for him lullabee'. Correct pronoun use and sentence structure are necessary for clarity.

× Yes, I do, because the melody have the very big inspiration for two people and the melody can change the mood swings in people and that's why I think the good the good song which I can enjoy it can bring.

✓ Yes, I do, because the melody has a very big inspiration for people, and the melody can change the mood swings in people. That's why I think a good song that I can enjoy can bring happiness.

The word 'melody' is singular and should be paired with 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'two people' seems incorrect in context; 'people' is more appropriate. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.