Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在拼写错误（"Sending"应为"Singing"），且句子结构不够自然，表达略显冗长。建议注意拼写准确，简洁表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I don't like singing because I lack talent and often feel embarrassed when I try. Moreover, singing requires a lot of energy, so I prefer to save it for activities I enjoy more, such as listening to music.

제안: 回答开头不连贯，存在语法和拼写错误（"cloud expensive"应为"quite expensive"），表达不够清晰。建议开头直接回答问题，注意语法和拼写，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I don't think I have the talent for it. Also, singing lessons are quite expensive in my country, so I haven't had the chance to take any. Besides, I prefer activities like dancing and painting, which I find more enjoyable and relaxing.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误（"I want you sing"应为"I want to sing"），表达不清晰且有拼写错误（"owner"应为"honor"），内容不连贯。建议简洁明了地表达，注意语法和拼写，使用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: I want to sing for my idol, a singer named A Little Mean, because he is very talented and I admire his unique voice and style. Moreover, he is handsome, which makes him even more inspiring. Singing for him would be a great honor since he has greatly influenced my music taste.

제안: 回答表达基本清晰，但存在语法错误（"can be bring"应为"can bring"），且句子结构略显简单。建议注意语法准确，适当使用连接词丰富句子结构。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and relax. Although I sometimes find it difficult and a bit embarrassing due to my lack of talent, I still enjoy singing because it helps me feel better.

× Sending also requires a lot of effort and energy, so I prefer to save my energy for other activities that I enjoy more, for example, and like listening to music rather than performing it myself.

✓ Singing also requires a lot of effort and energy, so I prefer to save my energy for other activities that I enjoy more, for example, I like listening to music rather than performing it myself.

原句中'Sending'应为'Singing'，这是拼写错误，导致语法错误。动词'sing'的现在分词形式是'singing'，表示正在进行的动作。建议注意单词拼写，避免类似错误。

× And how to sing. No, I haven't learned how to sing 'cause I don't think I have an inner ability for it.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because I don't think I have an inner ability for it.

原句中'And how to sing.'是一个不完整的句子，缺少主语和谓语，属于句子结构错误。这里应删除该短语，使句子完整。

× Also, singing lessons in my country can cloud expensive so I haven't had the opportunity to take anything.

✓ Also, singing lessons in my country can be quite expensive so I haven't had the opportunity to take any.

原句中'cloud expensive'应为'quite expensive'，'cloud'是拼写错误，且'take anything'用法不当，应该用'take any'表示否定句中的不定代词。建议注意词汇选择和拼写。

× I want you sing for my idol who is a career idol called A Little Mean because he's very talented and I really admire his unique voice and style.

✓ I want to sing for my idol who is a career idol called A Little Mean because he's very talented and I really admire his unique voice and style.

原句中'I want you sing'语法错误，缺少不定式to，且语义不符，应为'I want to sing'表示自己想唱歌。建议注意动词不定式的正确使用。

× Singing for him would be a great owner because he has influenced me a lot in my music.

✓ Singing for him would be a great honor because he has influenced me a lot in my music.

原句中'owner'应为'honor'，这是词汇错误，导致句意不明。'honor'表示荣誉，符合语境。建议注意词汇的准确使用。

× Yes, I do think singing can be bring happiness to people 'cause it allows them to experience their emotions and relax.

✓ Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to experience their emotions and relax.

原句中'can be bring'结构错误，'can'后应直接接动词原形，故应为'can bring'。建议注意情态动词后动词形式的正确使用。