Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Tu respuesta tiene varios errores gramaticales y de vocabulario que dificultan la comprensión. Además, algunas frases no son claras ni naturales. Te recomiendo practicar estructuras simples y vocabulario relacionado con emociones y actividades para expresar tus ideas con claridad y coherencia.

예시: Yes, I really like singing because it makes me feel happy and confident. For example, when I sing my favorite songs at home or with my friends, I feel relaxed and joyful.

제안: Tu respuesta es confusa y contiene errores de pronunciación y gramática que afectan la claridad. Debes enfocarte en construir oraciones completas y coherentes, usando vocabulario adecuado para describir experiencias pasadas y beneficios de aprender a cantar.

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child because I was part of the school choir. I really enjoyed it because it helped me improve my voice and made me feel more confident when performing.

제안: Tu respuesta tiene buenas ideas, pero la gramática y el vocabulario incorrectos dificultan la comprensión. Te sugiero practicar expresiones para hablar de preferencias y emociones, y usar conectores para que tus ideas fluyan mejor.

예시: I prefer to sing only for my friends and family because they make me feel comfortable and confident. Singing for them helps me express my true emotions and enjoy the moment.

제안: Tu respuesta es clara pero contiene errores gramaticales y de vocabulario que afectan la naturalidad. Te recomiendo practicar el uso correcto de tiempos verbales y vocabulario relacionado con emociones para mejorar la fluidez y precisión.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and feel more relaxed. However, if someone does not like singing, it might not make them feel happy at all.

× Yes, I really like angels singing because Cedar has beautiful Millie that touches my heart.

✓ Yes, I really like angels singing because Cedar has a beautiful melody that touches my heart.

The word 'Millie' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'melody', which is a noun that fits the context. Also, 'beautiful' is correctly used as an adjective to describe 'melody'. This correction improves clarity and meaning.

× Singing hills me to feel come.

✓ Singing helps me to feel calm.

The phrase 'hills me to feel come' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'helps me to feel calm'. 'Helps' is the correct verb, and 'calm' is the adjective describing the feeling. This correction fixes verb choice and word usage.

× And confident.

✓ and confident.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and can cause sentence fragments. Here, 'and confident' should be connected to the previous sentence to form a complete thought.

× For example.

✓ For example,

'For example' is an introductory phrase and should be followed by a comma, not a period, to connect it to the following sentence.

× When I sing my favorite song at home of my friends.

✓ When I sing my favorite song at home or with my friends,

The phrase 'at home of my friends' is incorrect. It should be 'at home or with my friends'. Also, this is a dependent clause and should be connected to the main clause for completeness.

× I feel better.

✓ I feel better.

This sentence is correct as is.

× Yes, I learned how to sync when I was a child because I was part of Charlie at school.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child because I was part of the choir at school.

The word 'sync' is incorrect; it should be 'sing'. Also, 'Charlie' is likely a misspelling of 'choir'. Both corrections fix vocabulary errors in past tense context.

× I'd really enjoyed because.

✓ I really enjoyed it because

The phrase 'I'd really enjoyed because' is incorrect. 'I'd' (I had) is not appropriate here; simple past 'I really enjoyed it because' is correct. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed 'it' to be clear.

× It helps me.

✓ It helps me

This sentence fragment is incomplete and should be connected to the following phrase for clarity.

× To improve my voice, Anne made me feel.

✓ to improve my voice and made me feel

This fragment is incomplete and unclear. It should be connected to the previous sentence and corrected for clarity.

× Make confident.

✓ more confident.

The phrase 'Make confident' is incorrect. The correct form is 'made me feel more confident' to express increasing confidence.

× Performing at other.

✓ performing in front of others.

The phrase 'Performing at other' is incorrect and incomplete. The correct phrase is 'performing in front of others' to express performing before an audience.

× I don't want to sing for just anyone because I think from my heart.

✓ I don't want to sing for just anyone because I sing from my heart.

The phrase 'I think from my heart' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I sing from my heart' to convey sincerity in singing.

× I usually shave my voice with my friends, family or people who make me feel confident and comfort table.

✓ I usually share my voice with my friends, family, or people who make me feel confident and comfortable.

The word 'shave' is incorrect; it should be 'share'. Also, 'comfort table' is a misspelling of 'comfortable'. These corrections fix verb choice and adjective usage.

× Singing for them helps me express my true emotion.

✓ Singing for them helps me express my true emotions.

The word 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to correctly express the variety of feelings.

× And enjoy them.

✓ and enjoy it.

The phrase 'And enjoy them' is unclear. The correct phrase is 'and enjoy it' referring to the act of singing or the experience.

× Yes, I believe singing can bring hapiness to people because it allows them to express their emotion and feels more relaxed.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and feel more relaxed.

The word 'hapiness' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'happiness'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions', and 'feels' should be 'feel' to agree with plural subject 'them'.

× However, if a person doesn't not like singing.

✓ However, if a person does not like singing,

The phrase 'doesn't not' is a double negative and incorrect. It should be 'does not'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs a comma to connect to the next clause.

× It might not make them feel happy at all.

✓ it might not make them feel happy at all.

This sentence is correct as is, except it should be connected to the previous clause for completeness.