Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且语法错误较多。建议回答时直接回应问题，使用完整句子，并且避免模糊词汇。可以用简单明了的语言表达喜欢唱歌的原因。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax after a hard day at work. Singing makes me feel happy and reduces my stress.

제안: 回答不够连贯，表达不清楚。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，然后说明原因或未来计划，使用连贯的句子和连接词。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons before. However, I would like to learn in the future to improve my singing skills.

제안: 回答内容不明确，语法和表达错误严重。建议直接回答想为谁唱歌，并简要说明原因，使用简单清晰的句子。

예시: I usually sing for my family because I feel comfortable with them. I am a bit shy to sing in front of others.

제안: 回答表达不够准确，语法错误较多。建议用清晰的句子表达唱歌带来的好处，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps relax both the mind and body. Moreover, it can reduce stress and improve our mood.

× Well, I really like thing.

✓ Well, I really like singing.

这里的 'thing' 是单数形式，但语境中应该表达喜欢唱歌这个活动，应该用动名词 'singing'，表示喜欢做某事。

× Because I think this job can he ask me to relax from my work, especially the hard work, the starting and so on.

✓ Because I think this job can help me to relax from my work, especially the hard work, the starting and so on.

原句中 'can he ask' 是错误的，正确的应该是 'can help'，表示能力或可能性，使用情态动词 'can' 加动词原形 'help'。

× Absolutely no, I didn't learn.

✓ Absolutely no, I haven't learned.

这里谈论的是过去到现在的经历，应该用现在完成时 'haven't learned'，而不是简单过去时 'didn't learn'。

× Some lessons from H.

✓ Some lessons from her.

'H' 可能是指 'her'，需要用正确的代词形式。

× I just see myself.

✓ I just teach myself.

'see myself' 语义不通，应该是 'teach myself'，表示自学。

× So I think if I have the opportunity in the future, I will take some lessons to improve the ability of it.

✓ So I think if I have the opportunity in the future, I will take some lessons to improve my ability.

'the ability of it' 表达不自然，应该用 'my ability'，更符合英语习惯。

× No, my empty a is I am I free?

✓ No, my answer is I am shy.

原句语义不清，推测想表达 '我的回答是我很害羞'，需要用正确的代词和表达。

× I'm very shy to say somebody, so I never seen two other one.

✓ I'm very shy to sing for somebody, so I have never sung for others.

'say somebody' 应为 'sing for somebody'，'never seen two other one' 语法错误，应该是 'have never sung for others'。

× Yeah, I I think this came here for people.

✓ Yeah, I think this can cheer people up.

'came here' 语法错误，应该是 'can cheer'，表示能力，且 'people' 是复数。

× Become happy nurse and bring happiness to people.

✓ Become happier and bring happiness to people.

'happy nurse' 是错误表达，应该是比较级 'happier'，表示变得更快乐。

× It can relax our mind, relax our physical.

✓ It can relax our mind and body.

'physical' 作为名词使用不当，应该用 'body' 来表达身体。

× And it can hear us to come down in to some extent.

✓ And it can help us to calm down to some extent.

'hear us to come down' 是错误表达，应该是 'help us to calm down'，表示帮助我们冷静下来。