Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer should be clearer and more coherent. Start with a direct response, then explain why you like singing with specific reasons. Avoid unclear phrases like 'Particular out like mastery.'

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax after a long day. It also allows me to express my emotions and feel happier.

제안: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Provide a direct response about whether you have learned to sing, and explain your experience with specific details. Use simple and clear sentences.

예시: Yes, I have taken singing lessons before. I found it challenging to control my breath and stay on pitch, but I enjoyed learning new techniques.

제안: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Clearly state who you want to sing for and why. Use complete sentences and provide supporting details.

예시: I want to sing for my friends because they enjoy music, and singing for them makes me feel connected and happy.

제안: Your answer has a good idea but needs clearer expression and better grammar. Start with a direct statement, then give a specific example using linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because when I sing with my friends at small gatherings, I see them smile, which makes me feel happy too.

× Yes. Particular out like mastery.

✓ Yes, I particularly like mastering it.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks proper sentence structure and coherence. The correction provides a complete sentence that clearly expresses the student's liking for mastering singing.

× I have learned how to sing that I had leftover the hardest thing because I find that thing is quite cold and I cannot seem to keep.

✓ I have learned how to sing, but I found it was the hardest thing because I think it is quite difficult and I cannot seem to keep up.

The original sentence misuses past tense and contains unclear phrases like 'had leftover' and 'quite cold'. The correction uses appropriate past tense and clarifies the meaning by replacing unclear words with 'difficult' and 'keep up'.

× I like to thank for my friend because like singing.

✓ I like to sing for my friend because I like singing.

The phrase 'thank for my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'sing for my friend' to match the context. Also, the sentence lacked the subject 'I' before 'like singing'. The correction fixes the preposition and completes the sentence.

× Definisi I think singing can truly bring happiness to people, 'cause whenever I think for my friends in a small gathering, I can see them smile and makes me happy.

✓ Definitely, I think singing can truly bring happiness to people, because whenever I think about my friends in a small gathering, I can see them smile and it makes me happy.

The word 'Definisi' is a misspelling of 'Definitely'. The phrase 'think for my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'think about my friends'. Also, 'makes me happy' needs the subject 'it' to be grammatically correct. The correction addresses these issues and improves clarity.