Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有很多语法和词汇错误，导致表达不清晰。建议你使用简单且正确的句子结构，避免拼写错误，并且注意词汇的准确使用。例如，将"seeing"改为"singing"，"US trace"改为"stress"。同时，回答应更连贯，避免断断续续。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and relieve stress. In my free time, I often sing with my friends during springtime.

제안: 回答中存在严重的语法和词汇错误，导致意思难以理解。建议你用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并说明原因。避免使用错误的词汇，如"alerted"和"saying license"。

예시: No, I have never taken any singing lessons because I am not confident in my singing ability.

제안: 你的回答语法混乱，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议你用完整的句子表达你的想法，说明你想为谁唱歌以及原因。注意句子结构和词汇的准确使用。

예시: I would like to sing a song for my family because they are my biggest supporters. Singing for them makes me feel very happy and expressive.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议你使用连贯的句子，避免重复，清楚地表达观点，并用具体的理由支持你的观点。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows us to express our emotions and connect with others, creating a sense of belonging.

× Yes, I like because I think seeing some can express my emotions and relieve my.

✓ Yes, I like it because I think singing can express my emotions and relieve me.

这里'seeing some'应为'singing'，动词后接动名词形式表示喜欢做某事。原句中动词形式错误，导致句意不清。

× and relieve my.

✓ and relieve me.

'relieve'后应接宾格代词'me'，而不是物主代词'my'。

× in my free time I also choose to saying with my friends in springtime.

✓ in my free time I also choose to sing with my friends in springtime.

'choose to'后应接动词原形，不能用动名词'saying'。

× Uh, no, I haven't alerted normal saying license before because I'm not good at saying an end.

✓ Uh, no, I haven't learned normal singing lessons before because I'm not good at singing.

'alerted'应为'learned'，表示学习。'saying license'应为'singing lessons'，语义错误。

× I would like to perform a a some for my family.

✓ I would like to perform a song for my family.

'a some'是错误的数量词搭配，应为'a song'，表示一首歌。

× Oh who were my the biggest supporters.

✓ Oh, who are my biggest supporters.

时态应为现在时，且多余的定冠词'the'应去掉。

× And they supposed to meet every decided.

✓ And they are supposed to meet every decade.

'decided'应为'decade'，表示十年，且缺少助动词'are'。

× I think I can feel very expression should in front of an.

✓ I think I can feel very expressive in front of them.

句子结构混乱，'expression should'无意义，应为'expressive'，'an'应为'them'。

× Oh yes, of course the same can bring happiness to people.

✓ Oh yes, of course singing can bring happiness to people.

'the same'应为'singing'，语义错误。

× We we are saying we can express our emotion and realize.

✓ When we are singing, we can express our emotions and relax.

'We we are saying'重复且错误，'realize'应为'relax'，语义错误。

× Express.

✓ Express ourselves.

单独使用'express'不完整，应补充宾语。

× And it is good way to get a sense of belonging and communicate.

✓ And it is a good way to get a sense of belonging and communicate with others.

缺少冠词'a'，'communicate'后应加介词'with'及宾语。