Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I really like singing because it helps me relax and feel comfortable after a busy day. I often sing when I feel lonely or stressed, and it makes me feel better.

제안: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể với các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally. However, I often sing at home for my parents when I feel lonely or sad, and they enjoy listening to me.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó dùng liên từ để bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

예시: I want to sing for my mom and my best friends because they always make me feel happy and supported. Even though I may not sing beautifully, they always smile and help me relax.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề, liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về lý do tại sao hát có thể mang lại hạnh phúc.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because songs often have special meanings and lyrics. The rhythm and beats can make people feel happy and relaxed after a busy day.

× Yes, I really like seeing because when I was a trial I used to have a tree more becoming a singer an are usually sings a song when I'm feel long Leanne because it helps me feel more comfortable an relax after a busy day.

✓ Yes, I really like singing because when I was a child I used to dream more about becoming a singer and I usually sing a song when I feel lonely because it helps me feel more comfortable and relaxed after a busy day.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect; it should be the gerund 'singing' to express the activity. 'Sings' should be 'sing' to match the subject 'I'. 'Feel long Leanne' is corrected to 'feel lonely'. 'Relax' should be 'relaxed' as an adjective describing the state after singing.

× Yes, I really like seeing because when I was a trial I used to have a tree more becoming a singer an are usually sings a song when I'm feel long Leanne because it helps me feel more comfortable an relax after a busy day.

✓ Yes, I really like singing because when I was a child I used to dream more about becoming a singer and I usually sing a song when I feel lonely because it helps me feel more comfortable and relaxed after a busy day.

The phrase 'when I was a trial' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a child' to indicate past time. 'Used to have a tree more becoming a singer' is corrected to 'used to dream more about becoming a singer' to express past habitual action correctly.

× Yes, I really like seeing because when I was a trial I used to have a tree more becoming a singer an are usually sings a song when I'm feel long Leanne because it helps me feel more comfortable an relax after a busy day.

✓ Yes, I really like singing because when I was a child I used to dream more about becoming a singer and I usually sing a song when I feel lonely because it helps me feel more comfortable and relaxed after a busy day.

The verb 'sings' does not agree with the subject 'I'; it should be 'sing'. Also, 'are usually sings' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually sing'.

× On Tue arness I haven't learned how to sing. I trust sing at home to my mom and my dad's day a listen to me an I just sings when I feel lonely and sad about some things.

✓ On Tuesdays, I haven't learned how to sing. I just sing at home to my mom and dad, and they listen to me. I just sing when I feel lonely and sad about some things.

The phrase 'On Tue arness' is corrected to 'On Tuesdays' to indicate habitual action. 'Trust sing' is corrected to 'just sing'. 'My dad's day a listen to me' is corrected to 'dad, and they listen to me'. 'Sings' should be 'sing' to agree with 'I'.

× I want to sing for my mom in my best friends because they always makes me feel happy an supported though I think uh, not beautifully, but they always smile and help me relax. Anna happy.

✓ I want to sing for my mom and my best friends because they always make me feel happy and supported. Though I think, uh, not beautifully, they always smile and help me relax and be happy.

The verb 'makes' does not agree with the plural subject 'they'; it should be 'make'. 'In my best friends' is corrected to 'and my best friends'. 'Anna happy' is corrected to 'and be happy' for clarity.

× I want to sing for my mom in my best friends because they always makes me feel happy an supported though I think uh, not beautifully, but they always smile and help me relax. Anna happy.

✓ I want to sing for my mom and my best friends because they always make me feel happy and supported. Though I think, uh, not beautifully, they always smile and help me relax and be happy.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'and' to connect 'my mom' and 'my best friends'.

× Yes I do seeing can bring happiness to people because in X songs I mean there's a special meanings and lyrics and the right some the beats of the songs can have you can makes you happy and relax after a busy day.

✓ Yes, I do. Singing can bring happiness to people because in songs, I mean, there are special meanings and lyrics, and the right beats of the songs can make you happy and relaxed after a busy day.

'Seeing' should be 'singing' as the gerund form to express the activity. 'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject 'beats'. 'Relax' should be 'relaxed' as an adjective describing the state after listening.