Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer shows enthusiasm, but it lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. When I was young, I learned to play the ukulele, which inspired me to sing along. Sometimes, I upload my singing videos online, and they have received positive feedback. This encouragement motivates me to keep improving my skills.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific supporting details using linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

예시: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. However, during primary school, I took a few music classes where we learned to read lyrics and understand basic singing techniques. These classes gave me some foundational knowledge about singing.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence. Also, be careful with sentence construction and verb forms.

예시: Most of the time, I sing for myself because I enjoy the personal experience. I feel nervous when singing in public or in front of others, so I prefer to keep it private. Singing alone allows me to relax and express my feelings freely.

제안: Your answer conveys a good idea but has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and be more specific in your explanation. Also, avoid filler words like 'um' to make your answer more fluent.

예시: Yes, absolutely. I believe singing has a powerful influence on people's emotions because singers express their feelings and thoughts through their voices. As a result, singing can make listeners feel happy, sad, or moved emotionally.

× Are you really saying together with my euclidis?

✓ Are you really singing together with my ukulele?

The verb 'say' is incorrectly used instead of 'sing' when referring to performing a song. Also, 'euclidis' seems to be a misspelling of 'ukulele'. The verb 'singing' is the correct -ing form to describe the action.

× I like to post my singing into to the website

✓ I like to post my singing on the website

The preposition 'into to' is incorrect here. The correct preposition to use with 'post' and 'website' is 'on' to indicate uploading content to a website.

× This makes me continuing.

✓ This makes me continue.

After 'makes me', the base form of the verb should be used, not the -ing form. Therefore, 'continue' is correct instead of 'continuing'.

× I do remember that we had a a few musical courses when when I was in primary school

✓ I do remember that we had a few music courses when I was in primary school

The phrase 'a a few' contains a repeated article; it should be 'a few'. Also, 'musical courses' is better expressed as 'music courses'. The past tense 'had' is correctly used here.

× we had several courses teaching us how to how to read the lyrics

✓ we had several courses teaching us how to read the lyrics

The repeated phrase 'how to' is redundant and should be removed for clarity.

× I most of the time I just as saying for myself and I enjoy the moment when I see myself.

✓ Most of the time, I just sing for myself and I enjoy the moment when I see myself.

The phrase 'I just as saying' is incorrect; it should be 'I just sing'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× I'm afraid of singing public or singing to someone else because that would make me feel nervous.

✓ I'm afraid of singing in public or singing to someone else because that would make me feel nervous.

The phrase 'singing public' is missing the preposition 'in' to correctly express 'singing in public'.

× I believe is singing has a big power to influence others make motion

✓ I believe singing has a big power to influence others' emotions

The phrase 'is singing' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. Also, 'make motion' is incorrect and should be 'influence others' emotions' to convey the intended meaning.